If You Must Original Internet reviews

Unbelievably If you Must was first posted in 2001 and immediately gathered glowing reviews. It became one of Deborah Ford’s most popular tales. Please scroll down for the reviews for the Part 2 that followed just a year later.

 

If you Must Part One, reviews in reverse order.

 

Reviewed by arm on 01/16/2007

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Reviewed by Cindi Smith on 06/02/2004

How could I get this lucky. I would love this to happen to me. I could never get my wife to do this.

She will not even let me dress up.

Cindi


Reviewed by james on 04/19/2004

wow thats scary shiznit lol i meen like the “contract” i dont realy see how it would be legal holding since he signed under a name of someone that dosnt exist but all and all it was a good story though a bit harsh


Reviewed by sevenwheel on 01/31/2004

Let me just say that these two stories (“If You Must” parts 1 & 2) are by far my absolute favorite on the entire fictionmania site. Somehow they just push all my buttons at once.

Bravo, thank you, and please consider continuing the series if you are so inclined.


Reviewed by Gerda on 07/08/2002

Hello, Madam Deborah Ford.

It presses me to write to them. I master the English language only sufficiently. For this reason I ask to answer it to me only in short sentences. If they want to answer at all. First an excuse because of the length.

I have read her history IF YOU MUST . I like it extremely. The history induced me the lack of the English language with a translation program in the German language to translate. Only unsatisfactory unfortunately. Therefore I have edited every sentence. I have both parts German in the right one now. If they liked to have the files for the publication, I can send them by email. I have to be able to read me even the text printed again and again around the history.

I can put myself in Oliver. My effort is the same. Being as a woman dressed. Not as a housemaid. My preference is a secretary or only housewife. My wife also uses this phrase. She also isn’t pleased of this. However, she also accepts it. We take care also very much that the doors are closed. The marvellous history is my dream ready.

I have very often read the history. I noticed some things. It is the artistic liberty.

I cannot comprehend for myself as could be so humble and devoted for Oliver.

Oliver had served the beer and had gone into the house. I would have got me changed. As a husband I would have appeared in the garden. I would have my wife welcoming. I would have explained to want to surprise her. For this reason my friend also would have brought me. Susi would have gone to the town with him. The history could have come to a harmless end.

Something else.

Mr Rowland left full of vigor by his mercedes repeatedly. The engine was faulty anyway?

Two different wishes also are in Oliver’s wife. Only alone with Oliver she wanted a right man and no effeminate girl. However, she was run into by him rather hard anyway. Could she even lets herself be sent into bed etc. . Early to late thrash from Mr. Rowland.

However, Oliver did his work from home. She was a managing director and worked for only 4 days in the month. No reference to it, the Oliver or his wife had to make still other professional work. Who shopped? You lived well very far outside the town anyway. Big house without staff?

Why can the covered men be never recognized? Still prettier than the wife? I think this isn’t so. Only a dream.

Yes, it is only a story. The second part is for not so good. I am a little missing the quality. You don’t give attention to Oliver and his feelings in detail enough. Perhaps because they have written this part of way only forced?

It would interest me also very much what they think as a human of the history. Are they a woman or a human? A TV/TS? This would be important, only one then could understand her motives better not that.

The hotel

The hotel is written similarly in which I don’t like this so a lot. Imagination too much. The husband also would have for it he doesn’t want to remain there said. At another occasion, this he
chests not wanted. He also would have his desire to go home spoken. He would have told his wife these were invented the stories and he didn’t want this.

The Office dupe.

Also this is imagination for me too much. His behavior, in reality that one of his wife and the boss cannot happen. Even if I don’t know the situation in America.

Summary.

I am pleased that they write stories with such topics. It is conscious for me that these are fantasies. One nevertheless likes to identify himself with the persons. Therefore it should be credible too at least anyway. For this reason I like Olivers history so a lot. I would be happy if they could do a continuation row from this. Why does only Oliver have to suffer? His wife got to feel the cruelty of Mr Rowland already anyway, too. These experience what for both now far? Do you get rid of Mr Rowland? Does she then become the mistress over Oliver? Has Oliver learned from it? Does he change to the right man? Are the two enslaved? Can they be departed? Does Oliver have to watch like his wife Mr Rowland married? These still could many aspects be processed.

Something pleases me particularly at this story. No sexual actions are described in detail. Only between the lines. One suspects that Mr Rowland was in bed with Oliver’s wife. A word like “fuck” was used only once. This is rare today and therefore means a special gratitude for it. The history is almost U-certificate. Stimulating nevertheless very much for one like me.

Answer you to me anyway if woolen, then to the following address of Gerda-Berlin@ t online.de

You can see me at http://www.slaveregister.com/350003

Yours sincerely

Gerda.


Reviewed by Gerda on 07/08/2002

Hello, Madam Deborah Ford.

It presses me to write to them. I master the English language only sufficiently. For this reason I ask to answer it to me only in short sentences. If they want to answer at all. First an excuse because of the length.

I have read her history IF YOU MUST . I like it extremely. The history induced me the lack of the English language with a translation program in the German language to translate. Only unsatisfactory unfortunately. Therefore I have edited every sentence. I have both parts German in the right one now. If they liked to have the files for the publication, I can send them by email. I have to be able to read me even the text printed again and again around the history.

I can put myself in Oliver. My effort is the same. Being as a woman dressed. Not as a housemaid. My preference is a secretary or only housewife. My wife also uses this phrase. She also isn’t pleased of this. However, she also accepts it. We take care also very much that the doors are closed. The marvellous history is my dream ready.

I have very often read the history. I noticed some things. It is the artistic liberty.

I cannot comprehend for myself as could be so humble and devoted for Oliver.

Oliver had served the beer and had gone into the house. I would have got me changed. As a husband I would have appeared in the garden. I would have my wife welcoming. I would have explained to want to surprise her. For this reason my friend also would have brought me. Susi would have gone to the town with him. The history could have come to a harmless end.

Something else.

Mr Rowland left full of vigor by his mercedes repeatedly. The engine was faulty anyway?

Two different wishes also are in Oliver’s wife. Only alone with Oliver she wanted a right man and no effeminate girl. However, she was run into by him rather hard anyway. Could she even lets herself be sent into bed etc. . Early to late thrash from Mr. Rowland.

However, Oliver did his work from home. She was a managing director and worked for only 4 days in the month. No reference to it, the Oliver or his wife had to make still other professional work. Who shopped? You lived well very far outside the town anyway. Big house without staff?

Why can the covered men be never recognized? Still prettier than the wife? I think this isn’t so. Only a dream.

Yes, it is only a story. The second part is for not so good. I am a little missing the quality. You don’t give attention to Oliver and his feelings in detail enough. Perhaps because they have written this part of way only forced?

It would interest me also very much what they think as a human of the history. Are they a woman or a human? A TV/TS? This would be important, only one then could understand her motives better not that.

The hotel

The hotel is written similarly in which I don’t like this so a lot. Imagination too much. The husband also would have for it he doesn’t want to remain there said. At another occasion, this he
chests not wanted. He also would have his desire to go home spoken. He would have told his wife these were invented the stories and he didn’t want this.

The Office dupe.

Also this is imagination for me too much. His behavior, in reality that one of his wife and the boss cannot happen. Even if I don’t know the situation in America.

Summary.

I am pleased that they write stories with such topics. It is conscious for me that these are fantasies. One nevertheless likes to identify himself with the persons. Therefore it should be credible too at least anyway. For this reason I like Olivers history so a lot. I would be happy if they could do a continuation row from this. Why does only Oliver have to suffer? His wife got to feel the cruelty of Mr Rowland already anyway, too. These experience what for both now far? Do you get rid of Mr Rowland? Does she then become the mistress over Oliver? Has Oliver learned from it? Does he change to the right man? Are the two enslaved? Can they be departed? Does Oliver have to watch like his wife Mr Rowland married? These still could many aspects be processed.

Something pleases me particularly at this story. No sexual actions are described in detail. Only between the lines. One suspects that Mr Rowland was in bed with Oliver’s wife. A word like “fuck” was used only once. This is rare today and therefore means a special gratitude for it. The history is almost U-certificate. Stimulating nevertheless very much for one like me.

Answer you to me anyway if woolen, then to the following address of Gerda-Berlin@ t online.de

You can see me at http://www.slaveregister.com/350003

Yours sincerely

Gerda.


Reviewed by pinnellipee d on 07/07/2002

I live in ct. and our Govenor’s name is Roland-This added some power to the story for me. A great way to stop a bottom from being a top. She who holds the keys controlls the scene!


Reviewed by joanna on 01/20/2002

come on we’ve waited long enough


Reviewed by Candy Sissiboi on 01/18/2002

(curtsey) Hello Ms. Ford,

Once again you do such a wonderful job showing us all the reluctant-to-live-out-the-life fantasy-addicted sissy caught in a dilemma with this story. The part toward the end, where Suzie is promised a constantly burning butt due to being caned each day to keep her obedient and servile is my idea of how one would keep me behaving as sweetly as my name, so that part, which some other readers did not like, really appealed to me…a lot!

Now for my usual flirt at those who read these reviews I will post my Yahoo profile so all may see just what kind of sissy I am and no doubt, those who click on the link after reading my review and this excellent story will agree that this Lil Girlie needs a firm hand and a well-spanked bottom for being such a tease!

http://profiles.yahoo.com/candytv

Hmmm, now what if *I* wind up becoming the reluctant fulltime sissy from all these Fictionmania stories I read and post reviews to? *giggle*

Luvs-n-Spanks,

Candy Sissiboi


Reviewed by SassySue on 12/28/2001

I have to agree with everything Alamo Preacher said. “If You Must” is a well written story of the humiliation of a conceited sissy maid. I loved the added drawing, which enhanced the enjoyment of the story.

To those who said it would be easy for Oliver to escape his predicamnet, it is apparent that since this is the fulfillment of his fantasies he doesn’t really want to find a way to escape.

My quibble is that the chasity device would be seen during the cannings (which I don’t particularily care for, it must be a British thing), but I’m not clever enough to come up with a solution.

I also don’t like it when the TV/TG character doesn’t get to cum, since I identify with that character. I ached for release along with Oliver. My suggestion would be for Marie to allow her husband a few wanks now and then while Harvey is at work to reinforce Oliver’s addiction to to the maid’s outfit and silky clothes. It could be a reward for being a good sissy maid.

Keep up the excellent work!!

SS


Reviewed by Patricia on 11/12/2001

This was a fantastic story. It has nearly all of the ingrediants. Plausible; reluctance ; stuck ; a giggling wife wanting to take it just a little bit further. A hint of revenge. I am not fond of the caning part, but Marie wanting to take it a little bit further definitely has possibilities. She can take away the male clothes for a start and suggest a new wardrobe. This MUST have a sequel. It is so much better than hotel, which I think is over the top, Although it does have the above mentioned ingrediants. Tone down the “brutality” part. Replace it with training and bring in Maries guests !!


Reviewed by joan on 11/11/2001

ahhhh another “be careful what you wish for” story… it was well done…but?… you COULD smell a butt in there couldn’t you?..lol… anyway, i MUST concur with the one review that said.. LEAVE oliver/suzie… go buy some clothes.. even.. and TAH DAH!.. hubby is home… and WHO’S been sleeping in my bed?… (i.e., throw the bum out and seek official assistance if necessary)… yes, i know it’s fantasy… but?.. sometimes it requires more of a stretch (of the imagination) than is possible…

(love your other work…btw…lol…)

keep writing,
joan…


Reviewed by Kelly Davidson on 11/11/2001

A wonderful story! I read this a few weeks ago and I like it just as much now as I did this. Great job Deborah! Hope to see more stories from you.

Hugs — Kelly Davidson


Reviewed by jenny on 11/11/2001

oh my… wish i’m oliver


Reviewed by Alamo Preacher on 11/02/2001

Loved every last bit of it. Read it a week ago and came back to it just now, and liked it even more.

It contained a number of elements that I don’t normally like (cruel male figures, convoluted -misunderstandings) but the writing is so good that these just seemed like natural elements in the story’s own reality.

Top notch. Now I’ve just have to read the hotel series. Looking forward to it.

AL.


Reviewed by gina on 10/26/2001

fantastic story, that i have read several times over.
Can’t wait to see if anymore adventures come along..


Reviewed by Likes to read on 10/26/2001

This story is another great Deborah Ford script. I hope it doesn’t stop here but goes on to tell what happens during the next six months. Does Oliver get back his manhood? Does Marie learn to like her husband in the role as a maid? Will Mr Rowlands stay the whole six months?
Only Deborah Ford can say. Will she tell us though?


Reviewed by Jenny on 10/20/2001

You have to stop use reasoning when you read TG stories. The Hotel series is very well done and I am looking to the next part. But this story bothered me since I kept saying “GO Change Oliver” from the very first. I have been saved serveral times by having a change of clothes close by.


Reviewed by Jon on 10/20/2001

great story. impressive plot


Reviewed by marcia maid on 10/19/2001

Another excellent story which confirms Deborah as the queen of maid stories (but we already knew that from the Hotel)

Hopefully the story will continue (it has too!!!!!)


Reviewed by Amanda Dresser on 10/17/2001

Deborah
Yet another excellent story that also lends itself to further instalments. I was there and living it!!

But do not let it distract you from further “Hotel” instalments. I have waited to long already!!

Amanda


Reviewed by Dove on 10/16/2001

Very well executed! The slow build-up was very effective. I kept waiting to see if Suzie was going to find some way out of it but getting more and more entranced and she was pulled deeper and deeper.

I don’t know if the contract really would stand up in a court of law since it could be countered as having been signed under duress. But the fear that it *might* stand up or that contesting it would require a public relevation should cover that escape.

This story doesn’t really need further development or continuation. It sets up the future quite well and leaves the rest to a well-primed imagination.


Reviewed by Dove on 10/16/2001

Actually, now that I think about it a little more, I can think of several plausible ways for Suzie to get out of her predicament.

The easiest is simply to change back to Oliver when Rowland isn’t around. Rowlands doesn’t know that Suzie is Oliver so he’ll have a contract with someone he can’t find so what can he do?

Second possible escape: Have Marie claim that contract with Rowlands is invalid since Suzie already has a contract with her.

In any event, Suzie can simply break the contract. The worst Rowlands can do is sue her for the monetary value of the contract. Since he wasn’t actually paying her anything, the contract has no monetary value.

I really do like this story but I don’t see why Suzie can’t get out of her predicament. Even if Oliver is worried about embarrassment, a few days of canings ought to make him willing to put up with any embarrassment to escape more canings.


Reviewed by nikki on 10/16/2001

I agree with connie
somehow the slow development of this story (and of The Hotel) just take me to another place of tingly excitement
I know it’s subjective but these are the best stories i’ve read by a mile
If there is a Deborah Ford fan club i want to join

I loved ……
the name Suzie for a start,
Mr Rowlands laptop on her head
the need to make the table perfect for them
Suzie’s wife’s long slow progression to her giggly drunken kiss with mr rowlands
the leather seats in the car
the pleading looks to Suzie’s wife …….

thankyou Deborah for giving us these stories
love
nikki


Reviewed by Ashley on 10/16/2001

Keep writing If You Must, Deborah! <wink>

Once again Deborah Ford proves that dominance comes in unexpected ways. I always feel a little less assertive, and maybe a little used after reading one of Ms Ford’s stories. And like so many of Ms Ford’s conquests, I end up begging for more.

Obviously a very talented writer, Deborah also uses the dosage-wise medium of fictionmania to its maximum effect to ensnare and enslave her readers. Please keep doing it <curtsey>.

Hugz, ashley


Reviewed by Michelle X. on 10/16/2001

I’ve never been a huge fan of maid stories, but this happens to be one of the best I’ve ever read. The plot flows along nicely, and the reader gains a sense of the true helplessness of the protagonist’s dilemma.

I only have two minor complaints. First, it does take a while for the plot to get going; it seems like there were a few things in the first half that could have been cut. Nevertheless, for a long story, I was surprised how fast it moved.

Also, I’m really not into physical abuse like caning, and all those elements really detracted from the ending. But that’s just my personal taste.

Overall, a superb job!


Reviewed by CONNIE on 10/15/2001

I don’t know what to think of myself anymore after
reading Deborah’s stories.I become so aroused after
them , I wonder of my own true nature. Give me more
please. Also ,can’t wait much longer for hotel 7


Reviewed by Julie on 10/15/2001

Deborah,
WOW!! I felt like I was there! What a helpless situation Suzie got into. Great story.
Thanks , Julie


Reviewed by miss jeannie on 10/14/2001

Deb,

Very well done. You are an exceptional writer and a master at taking apart a feminized male. Keep up the good work!

jeannie


Reviewed by Pamela on 10/13/2001

Deborah,

Now you’ve gone and done it…. Not only do I have to wait to find out what happens to Debbie after she passed “the point”, but now I have to wait to see what happens to Suzie after her first canning. I’m sure that all of the waiting will result in more wonderful reading. You are a very talented writer.

Regards,

Pamela

 

 

If you Must Part Two, reviews in reverse order.

 

Newest reviews are at the top of the page.


Reviewed by sandi on 06/23/2006

 

Thanks for a delightful story… So cleverly and imaginatively written. I especially enjoyed part one of this story. Its one of the best stories i’ve ever read on fictionmania. Even though you had a very clever “ending” to part one, I was surprised and delighted to fnd there was a part two. Although i enjoyed part two, I was a little disapointed that Master didn’t force suzie to provide more oral service.. perhaps in part 3? wink wink. In any case, I am definitely looking forward to reading more of your work.


Reviewed by Juliette Lima on 07/06/2004

 

It is at the end a horror story. Very much befitting a Hitchcock film. A wish fulfilled with no escape. Yes there is a way out, but the way out requires revealing the “shameful secret” the husband in fact has no binding contract, there is no meeting of the minds, due to duress. And no consideration given to both parties. and acceptence is forced. However the fool is not capable of seeing his way out. In reality you can’t die from embarassment, but this isn’t reality. The two stories taken together make a very dark little horror tale and fit nicely into the entertainment section of life.


Reviewed by skorcher on 05/17/2004

 

I really do hope you plan on writing more to this story.
great writing!! enjoy all your writting


Reviewed by Mario on 08/17/2003

 

Six weeks later, I am reading this again. Did some research and I found Suzie’s way out of the contract. I only wish someone could tell her. Maybe Marie lightens up and finally sides with her husband. Perhaps I’ll get my wish and you’ll do a happy sequel. Maybe I’ll have to write my own, as I don’t see any favorable outcome for poor Suzie. Anyway, this is what she needs to know.

CONTRACT: An agreement between a number of parties, binding them to carry out certain actions or forebear from certain actions, and intending to have legal consequences. A contract is formed under the principle of consensus ad idem, that is, all parties are in agreement as to the particulars of the contract.

A proper, useful contract is valid and enforceable. For a contract to be valid (that is legally binding) these five requirements are often expressed:

-there must be an offer by one of the parties AND
-it must be accepted by the other; AND
-the parties must be in agreement on objects of the contract, which is usually expressed consensus ad idem, or `meeting of minds’, AND
-unless the contract is `by deed’ there must be consideration. That is, the offerer must demand something of the offeree. Except in special cases, courts will not enforce contracts that offer something for nothing. AND
-the parties must have an intention to enter into a legally binding agreement

These requirements operate alongside the basic requirements for legality which govern any legal instrument, that is,

-the parties that enter into the contract must consent fully to do so, and
-they must have the legal capacity to enter into a contract, and
-they must be capable of carrying out their respective parts of the agreement, and
-the actions demanded of the contracting parties must be legal.

Needless to say, Suzie’s contract cannot legally be enforced.

In my fantasy sequel, I personally would drop this bomb on Suzie and Harvey both, then the Master of the household would get a swift kick in the crotch. No, wait…several. At the very least nine.

As for Marie, I would force her into Suzie’s maid dress and tell her to make Suzie and me coffee, after I shoot a load right into her fucking eyeballs. Needless to say, I withdrawal my request for a sappy, syrupy ending for husband and wife, since that ho-bag Marie doesn’t deserve forgiveness after making her final choice to hand the keys over to Harvey.

Afterward, Suzie will cry out “Throw your Hog in me! (or something like that) as I unlock the chastity belt. After we make the pillars of heaven shake and make angels weep, I’d slap the chastity belt on Harvey Rowlands and flush the keys. Then, following a few more kicks to the groin, I’d drop him off butt ass naked at a busy intersection around tea time. Same for Marie, minus the jimmy kickin’ since she doesn’t have one.

Maybe it would be easier if Suzie and I just pistol whipped them both. That alone would satisfy my twisted sense of justice.

And they lived happily ever after.

It’s very rare that I get THIS worked up over a figment of someone else’s imagination, but that’s the sign of good writing; provoking strong reactions in others (but not this strong, I’m just a sick fucker). Your writings are truly phenomenal. Looking forward to more of your work!

-M


Reviewed by Mario on 07/01/2003

 

There is always a defining moment in a story. In this one, a poor sissy, desperate for release is so painfully, brutally, and oh so deliciously DENIED!!! (Insert DIABOLICAL LAUGHTER). That one scene alone is priceless, and I will forever recall the warm fuzzy feeling I got when I saw a beautiful fantasy disintegrate into a hideous nightmare.

This is the second story of yours I have read, and like “Exposed in the sun,” you take those devices (both literary and bondage ones) and apply them in all the right ways. And like the aforementioned story, it’s a sick pairing destined to become what it has become…the truth. (Pinky finger to corner of mouth in the Dr. Evil motion). Ooo!!!

One comment though…I could see poor Suzie (love that name for a sissy, BTW) trying to commit suicide. She wasn’t that bad, she was just an uncontrollable horndog who wouldn’t let up for a moment. I freaked when she threatened to leave and file for divorce, etc. Wow. I’ve never seen a sissy come that close to flipping out. Simply Riveting. Masterful.

If she ever gets to cum, I hope she feels like a natural woman. She sure as hell paid for it. Hmm…kinda makes me wonder if she can cum with a vibrator jammed up her sissypuff (or ASS, depending on how you like to word things) with the chastity belt on.

Until next story,

-M


Reviewed by Emma on 05/03/2003

 

WONDERFUL, especially the scene wher the handcuffed sissy is denied ‘her’ relief at the crucial point!
intense frustration and humiliation skillfully crafted erotica!
it would be lovely to have these stories enhanced by good illustrations, just a thought.

Emma


Reviewed by ricer on 04/14/2003

 

I’ve just re-read this wonderful story. It gets better with every read. I truly wish you would cinsider a part 3. I see Suzi being forced in to a she-male serving his wife and their master over the year of his contract. I see her coming under Harvy’s control more as the year passes until she is his sex toy as is Suzi. Lots of interseting twists possible as only you can write them.


Reviewed by Bonnie on 03/09/2003

 

Deborah Ford

I must say your “IF YOU MUST” series is one of my all time favorite storys. I hope you will continue the series, perhaps after Suzies year of service is up with his wife and master deciding to keep Suzie as a maid permanently and force more permanent feminization upon her.

But please keep up the good work. I look forward to all your stories….


Reviewed by Ria on 08/19/2002

 

Miss Ford, I must tell you I love your stories, your great. I really like the story, If You Must. I really do hope you plan on writing more to this story. There are so many ways to go with it I cant even begain. I like the ideal of Oliver being stuck in his situation, caused by himself. I would like to see his wife Marie continue his transformation, secertly, unkown buy Master Rowlands or Oliver. She wishes to keep her maid and master. Or she could be transforming him with Master Rowland help, and togather put him to very ackward situations. Any way you write it i know it will be good. Just wanted to say hi and thank you for the great stories. Keep them coming.
Your Fan
Ria


Reviewed by Gerda-Berlin on 08/08/2002

 

Hello.
I liked the history very much. Have informed about it before. Will there be a part three? The history doesn’t come to an end yet. Suzie must live as a girl. It experiences what in this time! What does Marie learn? I like happy ends. Suzie and Marie should stay together. Retiring for Harvey after some time. Marie should learn dominance. Suzie on hormones? real chests? Castration? Letting tail in chastity-belt. Erection help! Strengthening with pump. It can therefore satisfy Marie on order. It can be punished also so. Penis can be extended with the erection help. Suzie gets humbler. Marie dominant. Harvey goes after Marie as Domina is trained. Suzie and Marie cohabit happily as slave and mistress. Still many possibilities of the dominance and education. You can write even in two parts. Dignity welcoming it very much. Gerda-Berlin@ t online.de


Reviewed by Gerda-Berlin on 08/08/2002

 

Hello.
I liked the history very much. Have informed about it before. Will there be a part three? The history doesn’t come to an end yet. Suzie must live as a girl. It experiences what in this time! What does Marie learn? I like happy ends. Suzie and Marie should stay together. Retiring for Harvey after some time. Marie should learn dominance. Suzie on hormones? real chests? Castration? Letting tail in chastity-belt. Erection help! Strengthening with pump. It can therefore satisfy Marie on order. It can be punished also so. Penis can be extended with the erection help. Suzie gets humbler. Marie dominant. Harvey goes after Marie as Domina is trained. Suzie and Marie cohabit happily as slave and mistress. Still many possibilities of the dominance and education. You can write even in two parts. Dignity welcoming it very much. Gerda-Berlin@ t online.de


Reviewed by ricer on 07/15/2002

 

I’ve been waiting for part 3 but realize you’ve gone on to other writings. I’d encourage you to do a part 2 where Suzi is made to have sex with the workers that are to build the space over the garage. As the time goes, Suzi is fed hormones and over time grows breasts much to his terror and grief. He gets no help from his wife. In fact, she is a sub to Harvey who over time gets her share of spankings and gives her share of blow jobs to Harvey and others. Thus, his wife gets to experience the humiliation of Suzi but loves it and gets to see Suzi for what he/she is -a simple submissive sex object who cannot exert himself against Harvey nor his dom/sub wife. I would end with a clear picture that Harvey is there to stay with Suzi being the Maid for the duration.


Reviewed by Gerda on 07/08/2002

 

Hello, Madam Deborah Ford.

It presses me to write to them. I master the English language only sufficiently. For this reason I ask to answer it to me only in short sentences. If they want to answer at all. First an excuse because of the length.

I have read her history IF YOU MUST . I like it extremely. The history induced me the lack of the English language with a translation program in the German language to translate. Only unsatisfactory unfortunately. Therefore I have edited every sentence. I have both parts German in the right one now. If they liked to have the files for the publication, I can send them by email. I have to be able to read me even the text printed again and again around the history.

I can put myself in Oliver. My effort is the same. Being as a woman dressed. Not as a housemaid. My preference is a secretary or only housewife. My wife also uses this phrase. She also isn’t pleased of this. However, she also accepts it. We take care also very much that the doors are closed. The marvellous history is my dream ready.

I have very often read the history. I noticed some things. It is the artistic liberty.

I cannot comprehend for myself as could be so humble and devoted for Oliver.

Oliver had served the beer and had gone into the house. I would have got me changed. As a husband I would have appeared in the garden. I would have my wife welcoming. I would have explained to want to surprise her. For this reason my friend also would have brought me. Susi would have gone to the town with him. The history could have come to a harmless end.

Something else.

Mr Rowland left full of vigor by his mercedes repeatedly. The engine was faulty anyway?

Two different wishes also are in Oliver’s wife. Only alone with Oliver she wanted a right man and no effeminate girl. However, she was run into by him rather hard anyway. Could she even lets herself be sent into bed etc. . Early to late thrash from Mr. Rowland.

However, Oliver did his work from home. She was a managing director and worked for only 4 days in the month. No reference to it, the Oliver or his wife had to make still other professional work. Who shopped? You lived well very far outside the town anyway. Big house without staff?

Why can the covered men be never recognized? Still prettier than the wife? I think this isn’t so. Only a dream.

Yes, it is only a story. The second part is for not so good. I am a little missing the quality. You don’t give attention to Oliver and his feelings in detail enough. Perhaps because they have written this part of way only forced?

It would interest me also very much what they think as a human of the history. Are they a woman or a human? A TV/TS? This would be important, only one then could understand her motives better not that.

The hotel

The hotel is written similarly in which I don’t like this so a lot. Imagination too much. The husband also would have for it he doesn’t want to remain there said. At another occasion, this he
chests not wanted. He also would have his desire to go home spoken. He would have told his wife these were invented the stories and he didn’t want this.

The Office dupe.

Also this is imagination for me too much. His behavior, in reality that one of his wife and the boss cannot happen. Even if I don’t know the situation in America.

Summary.

I am pleased that they write stories with such topics. It is conscious for me that these are fantasies. One nevertheless likes to identify himself with the persons. Therefore it should be credible too at least anyway. For this reason I like Olivers history so a lot. I would be happy if they could do a continuation row from this. Why does only Oliver have to suffer? His wife got to feel the cruelty of Mr Rowland already anyway, too. These experience what for both now far? Do you get rid of Mr Rowland? Does she then become the mistress over Oliver? Has Oliver learned from it? Does he change to the right man? Are the two enslaved? Can they be departed? Does Oliver have to watch like his wife Mr Rowland married? These still could many aspects be processed.

Something pleases me particularly at this story. No sexual actions are described in detail. Only between the lines. One suspects that Mr Rowland was in bed with Oliver’s wife. A word like “fuck” was used only once. This is rare today and therefore means a special gratitude for it. The history is almost U-certificate. Stimulating nevertheless very much for one like me.

Answer you to me anyway if woolen, then to the following address of Gerda-Berlin@ t online.de

You can see me at http://www.slaveregister.com/350003

Yours sincerely

Gerda.


Reviewed by your devoted fan(harmless) on 05/08/2002

 

OOH Miss Ford,
you are truely a wonderful writer.what can i say..i loved if you must 2..as much as the first.
please write a third installment….i have read many stories on this site.If you must 1&2 is the best..and maybe the best i ever read.i guess it seems the perfect story that mix with my ideal situation.
thank you….i will read it many times in the future i’m sure..which for me is saying alot.Usually once is enough even if i really like a piece


Reviewed by Acer on 03/13/2002

 

Good story of the problems that can arise when you get what you wish for. As you continue this story can you by the end of the contract year have the two men determine that what the wife wants is to be controlled by a Man. Harvey agrees to fulfill her needs and is released. Taking his cue from all that Suzie has learned he proceeds to take control and puts his wife through her paces. Eventually they both realise that they are both subs and proceed to look for a Master or Mistress to run their lives. Luckily they find one such who runs them sexually but is not an outright thief who is only out for their money.


Reviewed by CONNIE on 02/23/2002

 

Well Debra,I just finished If I must 2.
After reading all your stories I once again find myself
feeling the same desire as Suzie.
Keep up the great writing.
CONNIE


Reviewed by Pat on 02/08/2002

 

Oh my goodness. I have just finished the story, and I am sad, yet I really loved it.

To be in that situation, and feeling the pain of everybody. Susie, Marie, and even the Mr. R. Once you have a dream, or fantasy like this, all it takes is someone to change things.

I see the main thing here, is that everybody got what they want. Susie will have her dream for 1 year, and so will Marie. I do believe by the time the contract ends, and it will be so staple in their minds, that they will stay in their roles picked out by Mr. R. They will probaully be happier people, too. That what’s I think.

Oh, Miss Ford, you are very talented. Thank you for your great writing. Please do continue these stories. Thank you.


Reviewed by joan on 02/01/2002

 

Dear Ms. Ford,
I can only say that while I was reading the story, I felt the excitement of “suzie’s” situation and the pain of Oliver. I cannot even imagine being lucky enough to experience the excitement part of his/her situation, but do not think I could endure the pain of his situation.
You are an excellent writer. I loved “The Hotel” and “Office Dupe” as well. Each one of your stories leaves me “hanging” for the next episode.
joan
wc19380@yahoo.com


Reviewed by ashley on 02/01/2002

 

Once again Ms Ford weaves an outstanding yarn, this time a scenario of what dire consequences may await those who play a little too freely at dress up.

As the plot thickens (along with some other things i won’t mention), one is catapulted into the vivid scenes so skillfully lain before us. I would be careful not to leave this story lying about where wifey or girlfriend might find it! Or, hmmmm, perhaps yes?

Hugz,
ashley

 


Reviewed by joan on 02/01/2002

 

imagine that?.. ANOTHER joan?.. well, with a wc@something.com… GUESSING.. the wc stands for water closet.. anyway,

ahhh, i said this once to vickie tern.. with… surprising results…i.e., the victim… became… the victor… and?.. no, i’m NOT talking about victor/victoria.. lmao…

anyway, your imagination is supberb!.. your stories are always fun to read!… damn, now what did i do with my HOTEL reservation?.. i know it’s HERE somewhere… lmao..(just kidding)…

ahhh, beating NEVER works.. as a means of subjugation… perhaps in the animal kingdom (it does) but?….. not with humans…(it doesn’t)… yes, we all have our “breaking points”…. still?… would love to see a little more angst in your stories…. and not QUITE as much submission….

just one reader’s opinion!…

thanks again for a “good” read…..

joan…

 

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