The Hotel – original online reviews


 

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The Hotel
by: Deborah Ford

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The Hotel


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Reviewed by Emma on 05/01/2003

 

hiya Debbie,

I enjoyed the whole ‘hotel’ series very much, well all your work in fact, as another reviewer aptly put it. ‘presses the right buttons.
While I realise you cant please ‘all the people all of the time’. I would like to offer a little in the way of critique, for me the dominating of the sissy’s wife by her lover (the hotel and ‘if you must’)while not totally spoiling the story, takes the ‘edge’ off for me the woman must always be superior!(or at least equal to their real man lovers) never the less, the cuckoldry of the sissy which is flaunted before ‘her’is wonderful!
an even more minor note, the uniforms in the hotel while sounding quite lovely, instead of the ‘tight black panties’, frilly sissy maids ones would heve been deliciously more appropriate.
I adore the touches throughout, like the slow realisation thet the ‘hotel’ is for keeps and the ‘game’ turns into ‘awful’ reality.
The scene in ‘happiness for all’ where the lover and wife eject the sissy from the maritial bed is devine!
it reminds me of my own first time as a cuckold and being sent to the spare room.

I’m glad that the reviews inspire you to write more, In turn your writing has inspired me to write. Maybe some of my work will appear soon.
take care
Love
Emma


Reviewed by cheri_tvon 01/27/2002

 

I have just finished The Hotel series, and without a doubt, Ms. Ford is the most talented writer of erotic fiction I have ever read. It is the story that matters most to Ms. Ford (and the reader) and she does an excellent job of telling the story. Even her one-part stories, such as If You Must, and Happiness for All, are full of twists and turns that keep the reader squirming. And believe me, I squirmed (winks). Thank you, Ms. Ford, and keep up the good work.


Reviewed by LaraK on 11/07/2001

 

I could tell early on in this story, it was going to be a wannbe read. I wannbe Debbie
laraK


Reviewed by mandyCDon 07/12/2001

 

great story so far, i was almost breathless just reading it. I can’t wait for part 2!!
Keep up the excellent work
love Mandy

 


Reviewed by Panty Pansyon 03/05/2001

 

Excellent story Ms. Ford.

I love the premise. This is one of my favorite “fantasies” and I have actually done a bit of searching on the internet for “schools” and have found two or three and gone as far as inquiring at Ms Silks School in the UK about enrollment.

The point being that the story is quite believable and it is very easy, at least for me, to imagine myself in the position of “Little Debbi.” That “proximity” to reality at the beginning and the seamless and effortless way the central character is instantly moved from that initial position of fantasy role playing into the very “real” position of complete and utter helplessness and vulnerability is deliciously believable.

Part one was also just the right length and had the advantage of standing alone as well as providing an excellent platform from whence to embark on Part two, which I have yet to read.

I love the sense of inevitably and intractability. As if Debbi has ventured into a machinery which will not only reduce “her” to the status of “sissy maid” or for that matter even “sissy slut whore” but will find Debbi, in the end, completely transformed into a “Barbie Doll” kind of sex object – hopefully with the remnants of it’s little male ego still wriggling and squirming and hopelessly resisting deep inside the confines of the intractable psychological prison from whence it can only peer out through helpless eyes at the reflection of it’s smiling booby bouncing ass wriggling image.

 


Reviewed by tashaon 03/01/2001

 

Great story…keep it up!


Reviewed by Barbie35on 02/20/2001

 

one of the best i ever read.
please send part 2


Reviewed by missjeanon 02/17/2001

 

This is a great start to a great series. You are to be saluted, Ms. Ford.

Love to read about sissies being forced to realize what they are – sissies!


Reviewed by deborahlford on 02/16/2001

 

Please be patient everyone. Part two of The Hotel was posted a couple of weeks ago and is no doubt working its way thro the Fictionmania system. To those who have asked: there is a further part to The Office Dupe. I also posted that a few weeks back.Thanks to everyone who took the trouble to add a review, it really does encourage me to get down to write more.


Reviewed by pricillaon 02/15/2001

 

I LOVE this story! I can’t wait to read more. Is this really going to end in a week? It seems like this sissy is in for some long term changes. I’m dying to find out what’s going on with his wife. Some things I especially enjoyed – the way the sissy maid warned him to get out while he can, the way all maids are made-up and dressed to look identical, and the seven words – sissy silence is golden! Please continue it soon, I’m checking everyday.
Love,
pricilla


Reviewed by Anonynous on 02/13/2001

 

Great beginning, but I’ve been waiting for the next part for a month!


Reviewed by Chas on 02/13/2001

 

This is wonderful! Your style is very detailed, very psychological and full of intrigue. I’m very much looking forward to more!


Reviewed by Linda Mon 02/06/2001

 

One of the best of many many good stories, I’ve read here. New and different idea and like others, am looking forward to readin part 2. Poor maid, sought after by Jaguar and the guy. What a choice, plus I wonder what his wife will do. Will she encourage the guy the gal or perhaps enter into the competition for Debbie, herself?


Reviewed by Sissy-Bobbion 02/02/2001

 

I can’t wait for the next part of this story. Please hurry. I wish I was one of these sissies learning to be a maid.


Reviewed by MsShania on 01/24/2001

 

What can i say…..another wonderful piece….i can almost picture her <s>


Reviewed by Michelle on 01/24/2001

 

a lovely story which got me very excited. Cannot wait for part 2


Reviewed by lizzieon 01/20/2001

 

Well done Deborah, this story is great. I found the last bit really exciting – poor Debbie and her friends walking round in circles, bottoms wiggling, lips pursed, boobs sticking out…. How long can they keep it up? Hours, I reckon!!

Let’s have part two soon, Deborah.


Reviewed by Sallyon 01/19/2001

 

I loved this story, the progression into helpless feminine domination, and being forced far beyond initial expectations. I can’t wait for the next installment


Reviewed by joanna on 01/19/2001

 

A wonderful story please hurry with the next chapter
i can’t wait to see what debbie’s wife thinks of her, and what linda is doing to amuse herself, the story has endless possibilities please continue it for a long time.

P.S. can i have the address of the hotel I sure would like to check in.


Reviewed by sissy sammy on 01/18/2001

 

Brilliant story, can’t wait for the next installment.

My next holiday will be very tame by comparison.


Reviewed by Connie on 01/18/2001

 

this is one of the best stories to come along
in some time. finally something that makes me
sit and squirm in delight.
great imagination, can’t wait for the rest


Reviewed by scarlett on 01/18/2001

 

Absolutely wonderful story!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter!!! Don’t listen to anyone…write what your soul tells you…


Reviewed by Johnnyon 01/18/2001

 

Very well done!!! I really like the way that the new “sissies” were broken down, and totally make aware of how helpless they actually are! The development of the other maid trying to warn our little hero(ine) leads to anticipation of how the realization of being trapped actually comes down. Plese, please…continue to develop and publish part two…or more…I would dearly love to see how our central character finally mets back up with his wife (mistress?)


Reviewed by suzy son 01/17/2001

 

This story was great! It’s the kind of story I like. I don’t really like the sci-fi stories very much, I like stories that could really happen. Can’t wait for part two!! Throw in a little bondage just for me, hon.


Reviewed by Priscillaon 01/17/2001

 

Dear Deborah,
I am afraid my last comments concerning your recent story “The Hotel” may have been lost somewhere in space. I am attempting to write again how much I enjoyed this story and hope that you will add and an ending, or sequals as you did in “Office Dupe”. Your stories about sissies such as myself are sooo nice!

The way you entrapped poor Linzi in his wifes clutches was so daunting. I just missed and ending where he was forced to face his wife in such circumstances with a limit on his speech and the spankinkings added to his humilation. It was a rather perfect but subtle domination.

Sincerely,
Sissy Priscilla


Reviewed by Paton 01/16/2001

 

Excellent beginning. I loved the training, and the cute names for the maids. Putting Debbie in that position with the guests, and not knowing what to say what great. Can’t wait till Debbie meets/serves Linda. Please continue.


Reviewed by chrison 01/16/2001

 

Ford is a great writer.

I have seen some great writers on the web ;

she-devil, well-known mystrious writer
Bea , the #1 maid story writer
Rachel Varga, exqusite stories of husband humiliating.

Now, Ford is top tier writer , compairable with them.

her former masterpiece “office dupe” is great too.

 


Reviewed by Stefani V.on 01/16/2001

 

Great start to another story and I hope you keep it going to it’s conclusion. Spanking, sissies, risque clothing, barbie makeup, chastisement and men what a combination… I loved the part where they are taught what they could say. Having them go through this ‘indoctrination’ together gives you the impression they don’t want to fail but will accept added humiliation to get their dream come true even though by now the dream has taken on the facets of a nightmare. I hope Debbie is setup to have a sexual encounter with a man/men. While she is cleaning with one of the other new maids, they should have to clean the mens tools. Their hesitation along with speaking should bring a stinging spanking too. Thanx for your great stories.

Stefani V.


Reviewed by Beatrice on 01/16/2001

 

I found this story very exciting and promising. Not being a big fan of spanking, I thought there was a little bit too much of that on the expense of cross-dressing themes. I know there is, however, more to come (i.e. bondage according to keyword-list) and it´s safe to say I can´t wait.


Reviewed by missy on 01/16/2001

 

wow great story. can’t wait till debbie finds out what linda has in mind lol


Reviewed by paul jutras on 01/15/2001

 

well done story although as I often said bonage isn’t my favorite type.


Reviewed by Nancy Roseon 01/15/2001

 

The best story I’ve read in years. It’s hard to be original in this genre and you’ve done it. Bravo! I can’t wait to read more.


Reviewed by jownieon 01/15/2001

 

yep.. escape makes sense to me…lmao…. nice story.. well told. ahhh….. still part of the resistance fighters..lmao.. hoping ONE day… someone will get away….lol.. though i KNOW that’s not the goal… still?.. one can hope?.. or… perhaps i should just write my own.. hmmm?… well.. got a very interesting story in the works.. ahh.. but THIS isn’t about me…lmao… THANKS FOR the story….. seriously..

joanie…


Reviewed by tecon 01/15/2001

 

Very good story, I would love to hear how your week, month, year or life ends up

 

 

 

The Hotel Part two

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The Hotel Part Two: What’s the point
by: Deborah Ford

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Reviewed by Mistress Meredith on 05/20/2008

 

Wonderful accounting of the proper way to train and treat sissy maids. I have had my maid, Priscilla Ann, read the first two parts, explaining that if he/she displeases me in any way, a similar fate as that of Debbie awaits him/her. The poor darling has been on his/her best behavior since and had better continue as such. Thank you Ms. Ford for a marvelously written piece. (Of course, Priscilla Ann typed my comments as dictated)


Reviewed by susieon 10/12/2005

 

A really good story a classic case of “be careful what you wish for, you just might getit”! I do hope there are further episodes, it would be find out how “Debbie” and the rest of the “girls” fared.
“Susie”


Reviewed by LaraK on 11/07/2001

 

This is a real panty soaker
larAk


Reviewed by nancy boy on 03/23/2001

 

Thanks for the great story. This is almost a morality tale of a “sub” who tries to top from the bottom. James/Debbie has picked out this vacation spot where his wife and perhaps some other beautiful women will dominate him according to his own self-serving scenarios. But the hotel manager, Miss Evans has other ideas. Her program includes brutal canings, homo-eroticism and sexual deprivation, which were never part of his plans. He thinks he can just walk away when it suits him but he cannot. This was to be HIS vacation but it appears that his wife is the only one getting sexual enjoyment from it.
I am sure that at some point James/Debbie is going to be forced to perform for that curly haired, grinning Mister Dawson, who keeps appearing, but I hope that Miss Jaguar will put this cheeky lout into his proper place as well. Perhaps he can take the place of Debbie’s roommate (Cherry/Dog) and satisfy himself in the same demeaning fashion.
Again a great story. Please continue soon. (One small request: Maybe Miss Jaguar and Miss Leopard can be uniformed in tall leather riding boots? – just a suggestion)


Reviewed by Amy Browne on 03/22/2001

 

Yet another excellent story, I can’t wait for part 3, please hurry and complete it for me Deborah!


Reviewed by mike on 03/11/2001

 

Best read I have ever had!

Deborah Ford, you deserve a Pulitzer.

Can’t wait to discover “what’s the Point?”

And doesn’t Miss Jaguar have a teenage neice
who aspires to be like her Aunt?


Reviewed by pansyTVon 03/10/2001

 

Dear Ms Ford,

You have certainly outdone yourself with this new story. Your writing is exquisite and takes me down paths I never thought I’d go down willingly.

But I wonder if there’s a bit of the Domme in you 🙂

I can’t help but feel like poor Debbie in her steel chastity tube as I reach the end of another of your postings. I want desperately to see Debbie humiliated by “her” wife, you tease!

Loving the torment at your hands,
pansy


Reviewed by Drew on 03/09/2001

 

Can’t wait for part 3! Does Debbie’s wife want to help him escape or will she betry him? Did she know about the Hotel all along?


Reviewed by Priscilla Gay Bouffanton 03/08/2001

 

Debbie darling! What a relief to see a story here that does not contain witchcraft, sci-fi or the rest of that tripe! You’re outstanding! Part 3? I hope so along with 4,5,6,7 & 8! Your characters are always so helpless and silly just like the airhead bimbo’s they are made to portry. This is even better then the story of Linzi if that’s possible. Though I retired from writing it’s authors like you that have inspired me to write again. I hope to put something together before mid March. I just sdore the way you have the sissies exposed to horny men. I love it when a sissy must wait on his wife and her new lover! Excellent job Debbie! yours, Prissy Bouffant.


Reviewed by janiceon 03/05/2001

 

Ms Ford,

I am new to this sight, but since reading a lot of the stories am now a confirmed visitor.

I loved your story and am now going back to find your previous ones.

I can hardly wait for chap 3.

and I didn’t think it was to long at all.

again thank you
janice


Reviewed by Trixie on 03/04/2001

 

I loved it!!
Please continue!!
Will search for this hotel, I want to join Debbie.
I want to be a maid!
Thank you!!


Reviewed by yvette filletteon 03/03/2001

 

Cher Ms Ford,

yvette just adores Your latest story. i enjoyed “The Office Dupe” very much, and i can see You have another masterpiece here.

Little debbie is getting some well deserved discipline. she will be a better maid for it. i can’t wait for part III.

Merci Beaucoup,

yvette


Reviewed by Paton 03/03/2001

 

Good job. As things countinue for Debbie, I can’t help but, to be in her corner, as Debbie’s wife(?), ponders what she wants. As she ask a question of the program, then about her husband, has me thinking.

Debbie too, must ponders some questions, to be a husband, or just a maid. A maid to his wife, or maybe a poor working girl, who job will be a maid in the hotel.

What a situation to be thrusted in to, also don’t forget about part one, and the phone call. This is a story I’m looking forward to.

Please keep up the good work. Thank you.


Reviewed by Charisseon 03/03/2001

 

Dear Ms. Ford:
I really enjoyed Hotel 2 and feel that it is even better than 1. The mixed emotions of Deborah are just exquisite. There are lots of ways that Deborah can be played now and I can’t wait to see part 3. Thanks for a delightful story.


Reviewed by okthen on 03/03/2001

 

All I’m saying is that the guy’s wife better save him or the sick, demeaning stuff you describe in this story has no purpose. No man or woman should be treated the way your story describes.


Reviewed by Annabelon 03/02/2001

 

Well done again, Miss Ford!
Since discovering your work, you’ve become my favourite TG author. I loved Office Dupe, liked Hotel 1 even more, and enjoyed Hotel 2 also, though maybe not quite as much as the others. But I can’t wait for part 3, and I love the idea of poor Debbie being humiliated in front of his wife, maybe with a real man present, trapped in the humiliating role. I have had some personal experience of appearing in front of real men daintily dressed, and know the thrill of that feeeling of blended femininity, helplessness, embarrassment and eroticism.
Keep up the good work!


Reviewed by Annabelon 03/02/2001

 

Well done again, Miss Ford!
Since discovering your work, you’ve become my favourite TG author. I loved Office Dupe, liked Hotel 1 even more, and enjoyed Hotel 2 also, though maybe not quite as much as the others. But I can’t wait for part 3, and I love the idea of poor Debbie being humiliated in front of his wife, maybe with a real man present, trapped in the humiliating role. I have had some personal experience of appearing in front of real men daintily dressed, and know the thrill of that feeeling of blended femininity, helplessness, embarrassment and eroticism.
Keep up the good work!


Reviewed by Crystalon 03/01/2001

 

Debbie,
Every story can’t satisfy (or tittilate) everyone, that’s the glory of Fictionmania with something for everybody. I think your story is wonderful. I enjoy stories of betrayal among others, especially ones wherin the male somehow brings his fate upon himself. You do a wonderful job of leading us along with him as he continues to think that his wife will get him out of his situation, while he is blissfully unaware that her thoughts are already on her new life. I hope in future chapters you will draw out his slow agonizing realization that this might be his fate before you leave him to his future.

For me, the physical activities serve as a platform for the dissolution of his masculinity. It’s the slow excruciation dawning of the actual situation that I enjoy. The references to “reaching the point”, and his wife not recognizing him are examples of his confusion. You slowly set the stage for his downfall so well. He heard the presentation to the women as he was serving them, but doesn’t comprehend that he’s the sissy hubby exemplified in the film. I love it.

Drop me an e-mail if you will. I would love to go into more detail.

 


Reviewed by tashaon 03/01/2001

 

Please…i need part 3!…Great story!


Reviewed by chrison 03/01/2001

 

Ms. Ford is a great writer, but the hotel part2 is not interesting.
it described the charater’s learning so detail in plain way.

Ms. Ford has more creative than that of hotel prat2.

anyway I like her stories.

thanx
chris


Reviewed by chrissy sissyon 02/28/2001

 

Deborah,
i loved your story so very much. looking forward to more and more chapters from it. i know some of the reviews comment on the length… i feel it is perfect, i also tire of short stories, with light substance. the amount of detail and development of your charaters, really need the time you have given them.

looking forward to more!

thank you for your wonderful story


Reviewed by Vickie Ternon 02/28/2001

 

Debbie, I have to agree with those who think this story too extended in a way, too drawn out. I’m not personally into humiliation by spanking or whipping, or pain of any sort (there’s news), so I only glance at or skip over the scenes detailing the whippings when that’s all that’s at stake in them. I wish you used carrots as well as sticks to insure his/her cooperation (though to each her own, whatever floats yer boats, etc., and I know some are into such things, and that’s just fine, for them). Also this narrator-hero like your Office Dupe is rather stolid (at times incredibly stupid) in his faith that his rights will be preserved, his wife will rescue him, it’s all a mistake to be made better by pointing it out, etc. — I have to allow that by paying scant attention to it.

BUT this story NEVERTHELESS seems very strong, with enormous appeal, and I have got to congratulate you! If you seem to need to write what I don’t need to read in order to get at what does work for both of us, please, pour it on, don’t let me inhibit any of it!

I’m not sure why it works so well. Maybe my confidence that you know what you’re doing, that our hero’s descent into a deliciously enslaved degradation is exactingly planned — the universe is plausible and promissory notes are firmly written, developed, and of a certainty will be paid off. That he’s a trapped dupe! That the maids and therefore our hero are and will be used as the sexual playtoys of the assembled hunk guests. That the wives will participate in the feminization and humiliation (this time please make your hero see the willing cuckoldry, that ultimate humiliation, and not like the Dupe remain in imbecilic denial). Above all what appeals if I guess right is the concept of a “Point,” a time when the character breaks, and a conversion of identity and desire takes place so “she” loves her enslavement. In which case, why shouldn’t a conversion to the pleasure — not the pain — of whippings take place too? That’s when more motivational carrots would be crucial I’d guess, since the sticks have become carrots!

If you can get subtler in your hero’s perceptions of what’s happening and how “she” feels about it, do. But any which way, above all, do keep going! It’s very attractive stuff!

Vickie


Reviewed by prissy sissyon 02/28/2001

 

Miss Ford…..!

I LOVED the story and appreciate VERY much the wonderful flow the story had…..It is an easy read….I never read V. T.’s stories, because she does tend to leave out the very things you put in that I enjoy SO much….!

But, to each their own, I suppose….

Keep up the good work..!

love,

sissy prissy


Reviewed by Amandaon 02/28/2001

 

I agree, the story is very drawn out and interest is lost…. way too long


Reviewed by latexslut on 02/28/2001

 

I don’t think it’s way to drawn out at all. The length of the story is what makes it unique. I tire of the one page stories of sameness.

I liked it. I like where it’s going. I look forward to subsequent chapters indeed.


Reviewed by latexslut on 02/28/2001

 

I don’t think it’s way to drawn out at all. The length of the story is what makes it unique. I tire of the one page stories of sameness.

I liked it. I like where it’s going. I look forward to subsequent chapters indeed.


Reviewed by Stefani V.on 02/28/2001

 

I enjoyed the story. I read the first review and expected the story to be long and drawn out but I didn’t feel it. I found the classroom initiation tittilating. I wonder why Debbie gets in situations where she should be providing sex to a male and she is always “saved” by something. Stop skirting the issue and have her be all she is destined to be. Thanks for your stories and please keep them coming.

Stefani V.


Reviewed by joanieon 02/28/2001

 

dear debbie,
thanks for a most welcomed part two …. to your story…ahhh it DOES work.. it IS working..lmao… you’ve done a FANTASTIC job thus far….. i.e… keeping your “hero/heroine” a bit aghast at the goings on around him/her…. hope you are not done… and?… remember.. it’s OK to let your main character.. come out on top… whatever that may mean to you.. anyway, thanks again for a great read….

joan…


Reviewed by Michelle X. on 02/27/2001

 

The “fantasy gone awry” is always a great idea for a story, and this theme is explored very well here. My only complaint is that this story is VERY drawn out (this file is huge, and it’s just one part of a multi-part story!). As a result, my interest was lost at many points, especially in the vibrator scenes. Personally, I find the probing of the psychological issues much more interesting than the description of sexual acts. I hope these aspects will play a larger role in future installments.


The Hotel Part 3

 

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The Hotel – Part III
by: Deborah Ford

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Reviewed by submissive slut angelaon 01/11/2010

 

Miss Deborah, <curtsey>

Being an airheaded bimbo I have only just read your story. Miss Debbie you have written what I have always been looking for “The Story of O” for sissy maids. My Mistress is going to send me there. I’m to go with her submissive girl friend Melinda, who wants a man like Paulo with a big cock to fuck her, Master her and show her the error of her ways by putting her over his knee and spanking her. I am to stay until Miss Evans thinks I have met the stringent behaviour my Mistress demands. Miss Evans will send her a weekly report on Tuesday. On Wednesday my Mistress will request my company on a date. What happens on the date depends on how good or bad my weeks report has been.

Love and kissy kisses angela

P.S. My girly name once I have requested to be taken to “The Point” by Miss Melinda’s hunky, big cocked manly boyfriend, is to be angela Nal.

Signed aNal xxx


Reviewed by laraK on 11/07/2001

 

Debbie’s poor bottom. Those vibrators in a sissies butt are a real pain, believe me I’ve been there and done that. But oh such a delightful pain. (giggle giggle)
LaraK


Reviewed by ricer on 04/27/2001

 

Dedorah – Great story and one I hope you will continue to a conclusion. I have given a lot of thout to future parts and here are some of my ideas. The next class session should have a morning of table setting and bed making since that’s what maids do. However, there should be some introduction to men by an afternoon of masterbating strange men from the hotel (visitors). Maybe the next day a morning of cleaning lessions and an afternoow of oral pleasing females. Here because they are sissie, they are blindfolded and Debbie is forced to lick his wife which he has never before done since he’s always founf this so very disgusting. There always should be a beating or two each part since this sissy is so over his sissy head. Maybe the last class he is taught the art of sucking men which totally distroys any manhood he might have and fixes his stay there forever. Last sceen he is carrying out his ex-wife’s (and macho lover) lugage to her car and with much anguash realized what his new future wil be.

It goes without saying that this is one of the best stories in this archieve. A real keeper.

You’ve done a wonderful job here. Please keep it up.


Reviewed by barb on 04/27/2001

 

I love the entire series “the hotel ” but the last is the very best so far I hope you continus writing more to the series ..The best pasrt of the last part was when debbie got mat in the resturant and statred yelling sat his wife <when the sat there statled that ,,that was HER HUSBAND and giggled at him ,,and when he was made to go back and apoligize.When she asked debbie if she wanted to stay and she <hehe> and she said yes ,,so her and her new b/f left her there .
I hope to see more scenecs like that where she is amazed that ,,debbie used ro be her husband ,,maybe you could have debbie be her personal maid for Linda and her Italian b/f for a while ? Or even have Debbie be Londa’s bridesmaid at her wedding to her now b/f .. Keeping eith the idea on Linda’s side that Debbie wants to stay there ,,thats great .. super story ,,I hope to many more like it …!!!!!!!!!!!!


Reviewed by ashleyon 04/25/2001

 

Miss Deborah,

Pretty please, Ma’am?

<curtsey>

Please continue this luscious story?

Oh, I sincerely appreciate all You have written thus far.

<sweet smile>


Reviewed by connie on 04/12/2001

 

dear deborah
i’ve read all 3 stories now and i am
awaiting the 4th installment. i am hoping that debbie learns to behave after awhile and can rejoin linda in the end.surprise me!!!
keep up the great work
CONNIE


Reviewed by cezzion 04/04/2001

 

if i was to say i enjoyed that story, then i would not be giving you the credit you deserve, that was by any doubt the best story i have ever came accross. Once I stared i had to finish all 3 🙂

well done!

cezzi


Reviewed by david on 04/04/2001

 

This one of the best erotic stories I have read in some time.Good detail and description of Debie’s thoughts and emotions.Debie always thinks Laura is going to save him(his loving innocent wife).Enjoyed the twist of laura taking her maiden name and having to curtsey to his wife and call her Miss Johnson.Treat her as royalty
while he is given a girl’s name and treated like a sluty maid.Every thing he does is totally controlled,
limited speech,clothes,action,etc.Anyway this and many other things make this story very erotic.Waiting for the next ten parts.By the way my guess is that Laura is
behind it all and pretty soon Debie will be serving his
lovely wife(former?) in any maner she desires.

 


Reviewed by jo199 on 04/03/2001

 

One thing worth adding to the previous reviews is that this piece of fiction is technically quite well written. Beyond that, the author has an ability to write characters that at least display differences between their conduct. For example, the boyfriend is nice to the face, but self serving behind the face, a really nice touch.

Pound for pound, the story has creative twists and plot points. Too often we are given material to read that says pretty much the same stuff over and over again. I love it when the scenes and acts done to the characters are so different. One need not be more brutal to be different and exciting, as this author well knows.

I recommend this story to anyone who likes the theme: One may get more than one asks for.

Keep it coming, and by all means, keep the wife stuff coming. I love that sense of betrayal that leaves the boy muttering, “Yes, Ma’am,” when he wants to yell, “What are you doing, honey! Take me home!” Delicious.


Reviewed by debbie on 04/01/2001

 

great story- a believable plot-no magic or genie.The maid traning was especialy good, particulary the tight corsets,panties,curtsey training,proper walking,limited talking,and above all the spanking bringing a grown man to openly crying and flowing tears.Waiting for next episode- would like to see more intense trining,perform humilating and degrading tasks.Let the wife accidently witness these events.Instead of letting a man take charge let a woman(mid 30’s) and teenage daughter(18) humiliate and punish her husband.Turning her husband from a once verile man into a docile whimpering maid.The husband might be forced to sign a year contract with the woman for spiritual enlightment(total servitude).Trying to help her husband the wife is drawn into servitude.Selling all their posessions,performing humilating tasks,punishment,until husband and wife are livng with mother & daughter accepting their new role.FOR ONCE INSTEAD OF A MAN TAKING CONTROL- LET A STRONG WOMAN!


Reviewed by tiffany on 03/31/2001

 

I-ENJOYED THE FIRST THREE EPISODES-PARTICULARY WHEN THE HUSBAND THINKS ITS JUST A GAME(FOR HIS PLEASURE) ONLY TO REALIZE THAT HE IS NO LONGER IN CONTROL AND AT THE MERCY OF HIS TRAINERS. HIS WIFE THINKS HE IS ENJOYING
HIS FANTASY. SOME OF IT IS SLOW-I WOULD ENJOY MORE TRAINING WITH PHYSICAL PUNISHMENT.SUCH AS- AFTER ADDITIONAL TRAINING(ORAL)AND PHYSICAL ENLIGHTMENT– THE HUSBAND IS HUMILATED& SPANKED BY A WOMEN(GUEST)IN FRONT OF HIS WIFE.THE HUSBAND IS CRYING&BROUGHT TO TEARS AND WILLING TO DO ANYTHING.(LICK HER FEET, SUCK DILDO,ETC.0
LATER -THE WOMEN TELLS THE WIFE THAT SHE RECOGONIZES HER HUSBAND ND SHE HAS BOUGHT A CONTRACT FOR HIS TWO YEARS OF SERITUDE. THE WIFE HATED THE WOMEN WHO HAD STOLE HER COLLEGE SWEATHEART. THE WIFE THEN REALIZED THAT ALL OF THIS WAS NOT A FANTASY BUT HER HUSBAND WAS BEING ABUSED & TORTURED TO ACT THIS WAY. UNFORTUNATELY,
THE WIFE COULDN’T STOP THE CONTRACT ABOUT HER HUSBAND
(ENJOYINY THE GOOD LIFE). SHE HAS TO MAKE A PRIVATE CONTRACT WITH HER “OLD” FRIEND TO REDUCE THE TWO YEARS TO ONE YEAR IF THE WIFE WILL BECOME A ADMINISTRATIVE ASSITANT(SERVITUDE SLAVE)FOR ONE YEAR.ACTUALLY “PAULO” IS HER “OLD”FRIENDS HUSBAND.WITH FURTHER “HANDS ON TRAINING” THE HUSBAND AND WIFE LOSE ALL OF THEIR
POSESSIONS AND BECOME WILLING WILLING SLAVES TO THEIR NEW MISTRESS.

HIS LITTLE

 


Reviewed by carolyn on 03/30/2001

 

This is a very good story as TG fiction, but its real virtue is that it deals with mch deeper issues. Poor little debbie has to deal with the fact that its a lot more fun to have sextual stimulation from thinkining about being a barbie doll than beng reduced to nothing but a barbie doll. “She wanted to go t ‘maid school” on her own terms. This story is very special in that it asks the question, just how much are you willing to sacrifice to express the girl sde of your self wthout shattering the story as stimulating Tg fiction.. Corsets and heels and maids uniforms have an appeal as an outlet but do they have an appeal as the defination of your entire self. Is the reality of being forced to be a barbie doll really desirable. That is what makes this story so special and interesting, debbie has a lot of doubts about giving up “her” old position in the world. Yes its a nice fantasy, but would I want to give up all my male position to live a life like debbie is doing, No, and a story tha deals with that has a very usefull purpose.


Reviewed by Nancy Roseon 03/29/2001

 

This is absolutely my favorite story, and I’ve been reading and writing TG fiction for a long time. The climax to word ratio is incredibly high. This story pushes every kink button I have, and does so with style. My gratitude to you, sweet writer!


Reviewed by Amy Browne on 03/29/2001

 

This is another wonderful episode to what is becoming a magnum opus. As usual I simply cannot wait for the next part – all my love Amy


Reviewed by ashleyon 03/27/2001

 

Miss Deborah <curtsey>,

Thank you for this lovely posting, but You still have me trapped in frustration like poor Debbie in ‘her’ chastity device! If ever i knew what it was like to be on the verge and unable to get satisfaction, it is while reading Your stories, Miss. You bring me right to the edge with the promise of Debbie’s wife humiliating him in front of her new lover, and then as quickly, You take it away <pout>. Or even worse, Linda’s new lover humiliating poor Debbie while she looks on in disbelief and amusement.

Like Debbie, i am forced to admit that i *love* it!

Respectfully,
ashley


Reviewed by Priscilla Gay Bouffanton 03/26/2001

 

Debbie; I truly enjoyed this! Can’t wait for the rest. I do love it when a sissy has to see his wife happy with another man. I love a story where a sissy may have to wait on his wife and her new lover hand and foot. You know, shine the man’s shoes or hand wash his underwear, maybe iron his clothes, clean his apartment or draw his bath. Then the wifes new lover could buy the sissy flowers, pansies of course! Another thing I like is having the sissy dress his wife and beautify her hair and nails before she makes love to her new man. Of course the humiliation of the wife spanking the sissy in front of a real man or the real man doing the spanking is fun also. Thanks, Prissy.


Reviewed by amyon 03/26/2001

 

I have to say this is one of my favorite stories. I can’t wait till the next part. The way you let us know just what the characters are thinking and the way you build up the suspence in the story is truly wonderful.


Reviewed by janiceon 03/26/2001

 

Absolutely fantastic, I have read each story avidly and eagerly awaited the next.

It is very well written and takes the reader on a lovley twisted path of intrigue and wondering.

As a sissy i could only wish that there was a hotel like this

janice


Reviewed by Charleneon 03/26/2001

 

Fabulous as usual! So many hints of things to come. I do hope you keep this going into a 10 part story. It will be almost sad when you bring it to a final conclusion


Reviewed by Sharon on 03/26/2001

 

Somehow I keep seeing a different character or maybe I cannot empathize with the male character here.
All I can think when I read this is that if I were in his shoes (per say) and I loved my wife (as claimed)
I don’t care WHAT the circumstances are, I would say something even if it meant a severe beating afterwards (which I have gone through due to my mouth). I do admire the writing however as the story is being told very well, (if it wasn’t I probably would be upset about the happenings to “Debbie”). PLease keep the same level of writing talent going. Don’t slack off now.

 

 

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Reviewed by Janelleon 07/07/2008

 

Deborah, I love your work.
You have here created a total dunce, a total zero, great job!!
Janelle


Reviewed by Priscilla Ann on 05/20/2008

 

Mistress Meredith instructed me to tell Ms. Ford just how pleased I am to have had the opportunity to have read THE HOTEL, PARTS III & IV and how pleased I am to have Mistress discipline me using means She has learned from the first four parts of THE HOTEL. Just last night I was instructed to write a one thousand word essay on how pleased I am to be her sissy maid while kneeling before the piano bench. Mistress Meredith told me that She an i will be reading the balance of THE HOTEL and the two part HOTEL CHRISTMAS segments in the very near future. Thank you Ms. Ford for giving Mistress Meredith such pleasure and in providing her with such brilliant disciplining ideas.


Reviewed by riceron 01/07/2007

 

I’ve been meaning to write this for weeks now. I recently re-read your ‘Hotel’ and realized how much better it was written than when I first read it. The first time my intrest was getting to the jucy/sex/B&D parts so I skipped much of the writted word. On the 2nd go around, I read every word and even more excited and pleased with the story than I thought possible. You are truly a gifted writer.


Reviewed by Rhondaon 12/10/2002

 

I love her stories you can almost feel the shame from a males sense of view of havining you wife or mate witness you being put into little schoolgirls uniforms or to have to act like a slut while your wife watches.servicing her male friends in a little french maids outfit, ruffuled panties and all. i cant believe it could happen but what if!


Reviewed by joanon 05/26/2001

 

thanks ms ford.. for a truly erotic story.. it’s the CONFLICT that makes it work…and yep, i’ve read every chapter as well.. still?… please, no matter how you decide to resolve this… DON’T let “debbie”… ever become “fully accepting…”…. hell, if this were my story…(the written word)… i’d probably disappoint most readers.. by finding a way to let debbie escape..and wreak her well justified revenge…lmao.. i KNOW that’s not your intention.. and that’s ok… still?.. any story… that can infuse me with that kind of emotional input.. MUST be a good one…(it is a good one)…

thanks a lot.. and keep up the GREAT work…

joan…


Reviewed by Beverly Bon 05/24/2001

 

Hello Miss Ford. (curtsy)

I just love reading you’re stories, they always seem to blend just the right amount of domination and humiliation. I love imagining myself as Debbie being humiliated by Paolo in front of Lynda.

Keep up the outstanding work… i can’t wait to find out what happens next.

Never stop writing

Hugs and kisses XXX

Beverly B


Reviewed by Amy Browneon 05/17/2001

 

I have read all your work and I think it is wonderful. I wait eagerly for the each episode and am always disappointed when there is not a new one to cling to. These are so good
Thankyou for such wonderful fantasies
Love and respect
Amy Browne


Reviewed by sissy ashleyon 05/15/2001

 

Miss Deborah never ceases to amaze me! i would never have expected the kinds of fantasies i am now having after reading this story. i got so excited when Debbie was finally humiliated by Paolo in front of his lovely wife– and worse in store for poor Debbie, i fear.

*blush* i find myself thinking about it a lot, lately. How even more humiliating (hot?) if/when Debbie gets an involuntary hard-on (like i get thinking about it) when Debbie submits at “the Point”.

Hugz,
ashley


Reviewed by fanny on 05/10/2001

 

I love your stories. The Hotel in particular is excellent and I wish that there was some way that you could just devote your time to futfilling this fantasy to the exclusion of all else… The instalments are too far apart! But I guess that just adds to the pleasure!


Reviewed by nancy boy on 05/06/2001

 

Your story keeps taking unbelievablly exciting twists and turns. Still I can’t help but to think that in the end Debbie, er i mean James will get back together with his loving and it turns out faithful wife. I know that she would never leave James for Paolo just because he is twice the size of James. Every Woman will tell you that size in not important (at least that is what they always told me!) I can’t wait for the next episode of this and, also “Office Dupe”.
Thanks again for these wonderful love stories!


Reviewed by Sissy Jenniferon 05/06/2001

 

What a wonderful series! I have enjoyed each one better than the last. The idea of helplessness with gradual forced feminization and submission is both exciting and chilling. I will be waiting for the next with great anticipation (properly petticoated and lipsticked of course!)


Reviewed by pricillaon 05/05/2001

 

‘The Hotel’ just gets better. A masterpiece! More, please!


Reviewed by Grimblyon 05/01/2001

 

Again, an excellent part of the story that leaves me wanting more, and more and more…

The use of language is excellent and really makes one fee, that they are in that situation. I just hope (and respectfully request) that the next part comes sooner!

 


Reviewed by Nancy Mooreon 05/01/2001

 

Deborah, you are an inspiration. Your story has me hooked.

You are one maid who could best be put to use slaving over a hot keyboard. It’s time someone chained you to that chair and made you write until your nail varnish smoulders.

Need I say that I can’t wait for the next episode?

 


Reviewed by Candy Sissiboion 04/30/2001

 

(curtsey) Hello Miss Deborah,

Your Maid’s Math idea is very very good! That is an unique idea and very suitable for training maids, lil girlies and others for making them bimbo-like.

Once again, you show yourself the Mistress of Story Telling and I thank you so much for sharing your talents with us!

Luvs-n-Spanks,

Candy

 

The Hotel Part 4

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Reviewed by Janelleon 07/07/2008

 

Deborah, I love your work.
You have here created a total dunce, a total zero, great job!!
Janelle


Reviewed by Priscilla Ann on 05/20/2008

 

Mistress Meredith instructed me to tell Ms. Ford just how pleased I am to have had the opportunity to have read THE HOTEL, PARTS III & IV and how pleased I am to have Mistress discipline me using means She has learned from the first four parts of THE HOTEL. Just last night I was instructed to write a one thousand word essay on how pleased I am to be her sissy maid while kneeling before the piano bench. Mistress Meredith told me that She an i will be reading the balance of THE HOTEL and the two part HOTEL CHRISTMAS segments in the very near future. Thank you Ms. Ford for giving Mistress Meredith such pleasure and in providing her with such brilliant disciplining ideas.


Reviewed by riceron 01/07/2007

 

I’ve been meaning to write this for weeks now. I recently re-read your ‘Hotel’ and realized how much better it was written than when I first read it. The first time my intrest was getting to the jucy/sex/B&D parts so I skipped much of the writted word. On the 2nd go around, I read every word and even more excited and pleased with the story than I thought possible. You are truly a gifted writer.


Reviewed by Rhondaon 12/10/2002

 

I love her stories you can almost feel the shame from a males sense of view of havining you wife or mate witness you being put into little schoolgirls uniforms or to have to act like a slut while your wife watches.servicing her male friends in a little french maids outfit, ruffuled panties and all. i cant believe it could happen but what if!


Reviewed by joanon 05/26/2001

 

thanks ms ford.. for a truly erotic story.. it’s the CONFLICT that makes it work…and yep, i’ve read every chapter as well.. still?… please, no matter how you decide to resolve this… DON’T let “debbie”… ever become “fully accepting…”…. hell, if this were my story…(the written word)… i’d probably disappoint most readers.. by finding a way to let debbie escape..and wreak her well justified revenge…lmao.. i KNOW that’s not your intention.. and that’s ok… still?.. any story… that can infuse me with that kind of emotional input.. MUST be a good one…(it is a good one)…

thanks a lot.. and keep up the GREAT work…

joan…


Reviewed by Beverly Bon 05/24/2001

 

Hello Miss Ford. (curtsy)

I just love reading you’re stories, they always seem to blend just the right amount of domination and humiliation. I love imagining myself as Debbie being humiliated by Paolo in front of Lynda.

Keep up the outstanding work… i can’t wait to find out what happens next.

Never stop writing

Hugs and kisses XXX

Beverly B


Reviewed by Amy Browneon 05/17/2001

 

I have read all your work and I think it is wonderful. I wait eagerly for the each episode and am always disappointed when there is not a new one to cling to. These are so good
Thankyou for such wonderful fantasies
Love and respect
Amy Browne


Reviewed by sissy ashleyon 05/15/2001

 

Miss Deborah never ceases to amaze me! i would never have expected the kinds of fantasies i am now having after reading this story. i got so excited when Debbie was finally humiliated by Paolo in front of his lovely wife– and worse in store for poor Debbie, i fear.

*blush* i find myself thinking about it a lot, lately. How even more humiliating (hot?) if/when Debbie gets an involuntary hard-on (like i get thinking about it) when Debbie submits at “the Point”.

Hugz,
ashley


Reviewed by fanny on 05/10/2001

 

I love your stories. The Hotel in particular is excellent and I wish that there was some way that you could just devote your time to futfilling this fantasy to the exclusion of all else… The instalments are too far apart! But I guess that just adds to the pleasure!


Reviewed by nancy boy on 05/06/2001

 

Your story keeps taking unbelievablly exciting twists and turns. Still I can’t help but to think that in the end Debbie, er i mean James will get back together with his loving and it turns out faithful wife. I know that she would never leave James for Paolo just because he is twice the size of James. Every Woman will tell you that size in not important (at least that is what they always told me!) I can’t wait for the next episode of this and, also “Office Dupe”.
Thanks again for these wonderful love stories!


Reviewed by Sissy Jenniferon 05/06/2001

 

What a wonderful series! I have enjoyed each one better than the last. The idea of helplessness with gradual forced feminization and submission is both exciting and chilling. I will be waiting for the next with great anticipation (properly petticoated and lipsticked of course!)


Reviewed by pricillaon 05/05/2001

 

‘The Hotel’ just gets better. A masterpiece! More, please!


Reviewed by Grimblyon 05/01/2001

 

Again, an excellent part of the story that leaves me wanting more, and more and more…

The use of language is excellent and really makes one fee, that they are in that situation. I just hope (and respectfully request) that the next part comes sooner!

 


Reviewed by Nancy Mooreon 05/01/2001

 

Deborah, you are an inspiration. Your story has me hooked.

You are one maid who could best be put to use slaving over a hot keyboard. It’s time someone chained you to that chair and made you write until your nail varnish smoulders.

Need I say that I can’t wait for the next episode?

 


Reviewed by Candy Sissiboion 04/30/2001

 

(curtsey) Hello Miss Deborah,

Your Maid’s Math idea is very very good! That is an unique idea and very suitable for training maids, lil girlies and others for making them bimbo-like.

Once again, you show yourself the Mistress of Story Telling and I thank you so much for sharing your talents with us!

Luvs-n-Spanks,

Candy

 

 

The Hotel Part 5

 

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Reviewed by Colleen Evanson 07/27/2003

 

Loved all your stories. The hotel series was the best for me. The innocent boy girls were very erotic. ” I know that when he finds out his mistake he will release me” Yeah, sure. Keep it up. I can’t get enough. Colleen


Reviewed by sissy ashleyon 06/08/2001

 

Deborah Ford does it again! The writing is not only thought provoking and HOT, but has me looking at myself in ways i never thought i would.

There’s probably some version of the “adult”, Miss Johnson out there somewhere, who i used to date who whould be laughing at me now if she knew i am turned on by this story *BLUSH*

Hugz,
ash


Reviewed by grimblyon 06/07/2001

 

Hi,

i was wondering if anyone would like to contribute to this site, and would Debs get in touch again. Your mail does not allow me to reply

TTFN


Reviewed by Grimblyon 06/04/2001

 

Another excellent addition to this excellent series,

I am considering doing a FANS OF DEBRAH FORD site,

anyone interested ?

Please mail me…

 


Reviewed by christineon 05/30/2001

 

Hi,
Great story
Forced feminisation at his best…
Love all the humiliation the maids go through
Enforced feminisation, enforced woman sexuality, enforced cucoldification, enforced bimboification, and so on…
Enjoy the new resistant character in the story (hope her fate will be developped, more in humiliation of becoming girl and fighting it)…
Love too the perspective of the men going through the costumes and role of what they had fantasying (inferior stupid girl living for the sex of men, blonde bimbos inferior in maid or bunny role)
hope that for the point the costume will be shamefull, being for all to see what “she” find so excitingly degrading for a woman before being one now…
love the humiliation being always treated as if real inferior stupid woman, living for the sexual pleasure… of others, and searching for their own
hope that the contradiction between the pleasure and the shame for a man to be treated and forced to act like a woman will be there…
(for example being breasted, and not willing it, mixed emotions of shame (what beautifull boobs you’ve , little minx), contraint (weight and move when not in bra) and feelings of pleasure and shame when visciously molled by the hands of a man… Maybe giving boobjob…
Hard to wait the next part of the story, please be fast, it’s since one year one of the best in my top ten here
merci beaucoup
christine ( hard to say that I’m going to the hotel with my girlfriend in july, reservation are made… arrrgh it’s just fictionmania!!!)


Reviewed by missy on 05/29/2001

 

what a great story! i hope it goes on forever. i ove the site, but this is the best story i’ve read.

keep it up!


Reviewed by X on 05/29/2001

 

Treating people like shit and abusing them to the point where their wills collapse is not entertaining reading (at least to me). I am intriqued by the story though and have hope that James will have a happy ending with his wife or be totally free. Ending it on a positive note would be great.


Reviewed by dee on 05/29/2001

 

Deborah Ford this story is outstanding. The best. I have visited the fictionmania site numerous times, but this is the first time I’ve wrote a review. I can’t wait for each new edition to this story. I especially like the confrontations with Linda (Ms. Johnson) and Paulo, each time Linda smiles, laughs, humors or expresses an “unacted upon” concern, it gets me. Having Paulo the one responsible for his dress on the point is outstanding, I can’t wait to see his choice. Personally, I think the point is where Linda will make a decision and I don’t think it will be to Debbie’s benefit. I hope the point is an entire chapter in itself. Please keep up the excellent work and keep the time between epi3odes to a minimum.


Reviewed by Jenniferon 05/29/2001

 

I’m enjoying the story a great deal. Although some have commented on Debbie’s possible salvation, this is, after all, FICTIONmania. For those of us who enjoy themes of female domination, cuckoldry, humiliation and bisexuality, this story hits the mark. Can’t wait for the next episode .. and I can only hope there is no salvation in poor Debbie’s future 🙂


Reviewed by Yvette Filletteon 05/29/2001

 

Cher Ms Ford,

i can’t wait for part VI. To finally find a maid dumber than Debbie! i can’t wait to see what Sally has in store for us.

Merci Beaucoup for all your wonderful work.

yvette fillette


Reviewed by Apollo on 05/29/2001

 

I have only recently found Fictionmania and I wanted to respond to your stories in particular. The Hotel stories are very erotic and well put together. You have done a great job building up the tension leading to The Point. Now that Debbie is about to get there, I hope you write in more detail about her complete submission. My singular complaint is that I would like to have more sex scenes included with each story (hopefully garnishing an “X” or “XXX” rating). Keep up the good work.


Reviewed by belindabrookeson 05/28/2001

 

Deborah Ford, is gifted. The way in which she maintains the tension in the plot, and yet gives each part, pace and substance demonstrates this.

Deborah Ford, has great skill, imagination and just the right balance in excitment and eroticism to entice and encourage the reader to eagerly read each episode, and be satiated and at the same time anxious to read the next.

I think that hotel has the lot, and is a masterpiece, a classic in fictionmania.

From a very personal perspective, I would like to thank Ms Ford for her work, no doubt a work of love, she sets standards to which we should all aspire!!!

belinda
xx


Reviewed by Stefani V.on 05/28/2001

 

I’m always looking forward to reading your stories and this series with the hotel is no exception. You have me strung out waiting for Debbie to get to ‘the point’. I am so much waiting to see what (s)he will (ave to wear and do since she has annoyed both her masters. I enjoyed the intro of Sally and how she seems so much like you know who at the beginning of his working at The Hotel. Thanks and keep the stories coming.

Stefani V.


Reviewed by nancy boy on 05/28/2001

 

I still can’t believe that Debbie has relinquished his last vestige of self respect by agreeing to ask that his wife’s lover bring him to the “Point”. Still I know that Linda deep down inside still cares greatly for Debbie, i mean James, and maybe she will still help him escape this ultimate degradation at the hands (quite literally) of Paolo.
Can’t wait to see the next episode, and hopefully see Debbie recover some modi-cum his manhood.


Reviewed by joanon 05/28/2001

 

poor little debbie.. sighs.. ahhh, ms johnson.. you are the “mistress of disister.”…. hmmm?.. cease and desist?… let’s see.. perhaps “debbie” could hook up with linzi.. and together they could rule the world?…rofl…

ahhh… thanks… for another episode of this rather dark story….

joan…


Reviewed by jeannieon 05/28/2001

 

This is very good erotic writing. Even D.H. Lawrence would be proud of you Miss Ford.

Poor Debbie is leading the life that many sluts would die for. Soon she will realize her good fortune and surrender her will. Of that I am sure.

jeannie

 

 

The Hotel Part 6

 

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Reviewed by Jeniffer Lee on 10/29/2001

 

Miss Deborah, your story are the best I have
read and I cannot wait to see the continuation.

 


Reviewed by Marcia Maidon 10/06/2001

 

Thank you for keeping us upto date Deborah 🙂

now i know that there is going to be a part 7 i’m even more excited and relieved that the story is to continue

many thanx


Reviewed by Marcia Maidon 10/06/2001

 

Thank you for keeping us upto date Deborah 🙂

now i know that there is going to be a part 7 i’m even more excited and relieved that the story is to continue

many thanx


Reviewed by deborah ford on 10/04/2001

 

Please Ellen – patience is a virtue! I think a few weeks at the Hotel might improve your patience and teach you about frustration. But I do understand how you and others are feeling – I know what is going to happen and i am still brusting to write it all down and read it myself.

As I have said many times before, ‘real life’ keeps getting in the way of this wonderful hobby of writing for fictionmania. I need a week or so per chapter to write it up. All the story is in place in note form. I am hoping for some time this month to get part seven online.

I honestly wish I could just forget about work for a month or so to write these little novels but sadly the bank manager wouldnt understand.

Francesca – is not little Debbie finding some happiness in her situation? I suspect that you would 🙂

And many thank yous to everyone who takes the trouble to write their encouraging comments (and they are encouraging!.

 


Reviewed by Ellen on 10/04/2001

 

Aw c’mon Debbie. Where the hell is part 7???


Reviewed by Francesca Barrieon 10/04/2001

 

A fascinating and erotic story with cleverly arranged suspense between parts, compelling this reader to read on. I do not like gratuitous cruelty and, though to some I may seem naive, I am still hoping for a happy ending. Whilst I find the mind control intriguing, manipulated disruption of an otherwise acceptable or loving marriage distresses me. That notwithstanding, I congratulate the author on a remarkably competent and highly readable and moving piece of work.Please don’t keep us waiting too long for the conclusion to this compelling story….and thank you.


Reviewed by CONNIE on 09/11/2001

 

Great job again Deborah
I have read all installments of the Hotel series
and have been checking almost everyday to see if
part 7 has come in yet. I’ve been waiting 2 months
now. Waiting is hard , please help us

 


Reviewed by Sissy maid on 08/13/2001

 

A truely erotic piece of writing that is expertly written PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE post the next part soon.


Reviewed by george on 08/07/2001

 

Realy good story.

For the writer who asked for plots.
Mayby some writing about how he is forced to be e “real” man for time. I think this is too complex for him and he desperately wants to be debby again but of is not allowed to. This can happen when he is trying to “escape”.

Keep up the good writing with a lot presumptional thoughts.


Reviewed by Angela on 08/02/2001

 

I particularly enjoyed the parts where Mistress Shania features…..lets see more of this wonderful Domme <s.


Reviewed by connie on 07/23/2001

 

great job again debra
i’ve been checking fictionmania everyday for the next installment. please don’t keep me waiting to long


Reviewed by Peggy on 07/09/2001

 

Oh my god, I read all six parts in one night. I just couldnt stop reading you truly are gifted and I hope that this is not the end to this wonderful story.

Sincerly

Peggy


Reviewed by nikki on 07/04/2001

 

Dear Deborah
absolutely superb series of stories. I have read quite a few things in fictionmania but if there is something more carefully crafted and hypnotic in intensity than the hotel i have not seen it.

I have to get a maid costume!

I love Debbie’s balancing of enjoyment / girlie enthusiasm for the maid’s world against the pain of losing the wife Debbie loved.

My comment would be to continue lingering in the key moments – i wanted to picture debbie’s hair and clothes again when she was on the bed with her wife and Paulo …… i wanted to explore her thoughts of ecstacy as she was touched by him and her realisation of her becoming a girl

I loved
the maid’s maths
the wardrobe room
the throwing herself at the guy outside
the competition with the guy’s wife at the restaurant table
the vibrator milking
the ooooohh surprise stance
everything really

Thankyou
nikki

 


Reviewed by Maid Louiseon 06/15/2001

 

An excellant series Deborah. I too sense that we haven’t seen the last of the characters and indeedd hope we haven’t. This has to be somewhere close to a sissy’s fantasy and nightmare all in one.

Louise


Reviewed by sissy meggieon 06/14/2001

 

ohhh Ms Debbie, part six is sooo very exciting and wonderful. You are sooo very creative and know exactly what makes sissys soo tinglie. thank You for all of the time You have spent on this series. its been soo wonderful to read and dream and anticipate each story. You are such a talented writer. thank You

sincerely,
meggie


Reviewed by dee on 06/14/2001

 

Deborah Ford, you did it again. Thank you for adding part six so soon. I too check out fictionmania just looking for the next addition. Seeing it so soon was a real treat. Please keep it up. I hope Linda and Debbie’s relationship continues, being placed in such an inferior position in front of your “ex” wife, is a special turn on to many. Thank you!


Reviewed by Stefani V.on 06/13/2001

 

Deborah,

Thanks for another great story. I think you should have had Paolo choose Debbie to be taken when he had both of the girls on their knees while Linda watched. The story is listed as complete but you left me with the sense of a part 7 after Debbie went to see Mistress Shania. Will there be more to this story? Will Debbie ever have the ‘pleasure’ of serving a man for his pleasure? Inquiring minds want to know. Keep your stories coming. All the best to you.

Stefani V.


Reviewed by Marciaon 06/13/2001

 

FANTASTIC!! another superb part of a expertly written story.
All the different characters keep the story exciting and unpredictable and each person add’s a little more to Debbies training as she slide’s closer and closer to complete subjugation as an obedient slut bimbo maid.

As Debbie has now passed the “Point” of no return she is destined to become the property of either Mistress shania or Mr & Mrs deacon or even her Ex-wife linda & paulo I can’t wait!!!!

Also thank you for getting this part out sooner than the others, I visit Fictionmania everyday to check for the next part and you made my day yesterday.


Reviewed by fanny on 06/13/2001

 

You keep doing it! I look for these instalments ahead of all other stories and was so delighted to see part 6 so soon after part 5, just please keep it coming!


Reviewed by Anita Coxon 06/12/2001

 

I love the story, its great. Lots of subtle humiliation and the slow turning of the person into something he wants but doesn’t want is fantastic. The story is something I would luv to happen to me, but know I #an’t. But your story is the next best thing to being there. Keep on writing.


Reviewed by sissyon 06/12/2001

 

The story gets better and better. I too wonder if Debbie can ever return to a normal life, or will she have to serve as amaid for the rest of her life. I would like to see a bit more humiliation of her serving the wifes lover sexually.


Reviewed by jeannieon 06/12/2001

 

Miss Ford,

This is a very interesting and unbelievably erotic addition to the Hotel series. It is one thing to be sissy-like and yet quite another to actually be a sissy and to be seen and treated as a sissy.

No, little debbie will never escape being a sissy maid. She now thinks of herself in those terms and cannot possibly escape her destiny.

Hugs,

jeannie


Reviewed by sissy ashleyon 06/12/2001

 

Miss Deborah is amazing! Done it again, hasn’t she? i confess i don’t know who Miss Evans or Miss Steel are, and that that bit is almost as intriging as the anxiously awaited part 6.

i was w/ndering and imagining how being masturbated by a man in front of my wife could possibly be erotic– imagined it every which way– except the way Deborah Ford described it! *BLUSH* on *BLUSH* Now, THAT was erotic!

Deborah Ford is a born writer! You go, girl!

Hugz and Kisses,
ash


Reviewed by Sallyon 06/12/2001

 

What a marvellous further installment.
Can Debbie be degaded any further.
I do hope so


Reviewed by Danielleon 06/12/2001

 

Been following HOTEL with interest and now with the latest twist in part 6, started tinking of how James might rescue Linda who also seem to be a victim. Is there any way this latest development could lead to James regaining his willpower again after all that has transpired. It would take, perhaps an unexpecetd but plausable turn of events for him to rescue Linda and the both of them return to their pre-hotel existance. Something the deus ex machina of the old O’henry stories. — a real challange. And how would James and Linda react to their separate degradations if they did get back. that could be a whole new series.


Reviewed by sissy ashleyon 06/12/2001

 

By the way… i think cuckoldry ought to be added as a new category in Fictionmania.

All i can do is *blush* like crazy, but i’d go that category a lot.

Love,
ash

 

The Hotel Part 7

 

Online Story Reviews for:
The Hotel Part 7
by: Deborah Ford

Newest reviews are at the top of the page.


Reviewed by Ashleyon 11/04/2002

 

There once was doctor, his name wasn’t Proctor,
His name wasn’t Gene or Jay.
And he thought it unreal, when he met Mistress Steel,
More devilish than CIA.

He thought her so clever, and so did endeavor,
To push his intelligence far.
But he’d wish it was never, no ever not ever,
When confronted by Ms. Jaguar.

With Bryant he’d flirt, in a little short skirt,
Whose wife he hoped never could tell.
That the cute little maiden, blond hair all abraiden,
Was finally freed from Hotel.


Reviewed by anon on 01/09/2002

 

I felt compelled to write after reading The Hotel (1-7) and The Office Dupe (1-3). I almost had the feeling that I was experiencing the story in real life. My heartbeat and breathing were affected as I read each word of the story. Someday I will be strong enough to write an account of one of my experiences, but nothing near as exciting as the storyline here.


Reviewed by Lucii on 12/02/2001

 

PLEASE tell us The Doctor’s story from his point of view – from before He ever goes to The Hotel until after She goes back on the plane as a secretary or air hostess. getting wet thinking about it.


Reviewed by “gina” on 11/20/2001

 

THE BEST OF ALL! THE CREAM OF THE CREAM!!!
A SERIES ..FOR SEX “NOBEL PRIZE”!!!
I WISH…I COULD SEE ON A “MOVIE” OR A T.V SERIES!
SUCH A SCENARIO AS THE “HOTEL”. BUT THEY DON’T DARE!..
PLEASE DEBORHA MAKE AS MANY CHAPTERS AS YOU CAN
AND I COULD DO “PERSONALY” …EVERYTHING!……..


Reviewed by Marciaon 11/03/2001

 

Excellent as always 🙂 I love the way the sex scenes are not gratuitous but still erotic and stimulating.
And again the story reveils so many sub plots and character interaction that you can’t possibly predict the story. Marvellous


Reviewed by samantha on 11/03/2001

 

Part 7 at least!!! One of the best story I have ever read on forced fem… Love the tease and humiliation the “girls” are going through…
Hope that the next part will come quick… Was affraid that part 6 was the end…
So debbie, you’re one of the best writer here… love your stuff… (with the professor too…)
More and more parts and stories please, can’t get enough

samantha


Reviewed by ashley on 11/02/2001

 

What a delightful chapter. i especially like the teeny sub-plot whereby Mister Bryant will be getting his blond bimbo in the form of the “good doctor”.

Cute. Well done.


Reviewed by Pamela on 11/01/2001

 

Debbie,

Definitely worth the wait. I really like Debbie’s little revelations about her situation. It shows the level of mental and emotional conditioning that the hotel has subjected her to.

As always, I can’t wait to read more about Debbie! Too bad, there isn’t a real hotel to train us as maids!

Hugs,

Pamela

 


Reviewed by CONNIE on 10/31/2001

 

OH DEBRA, you have me hooked bigtime. The wait was worth it.The story makes me wish I was at the hotel.
most of us dream of what you write,thank goodness you put it in words so well. now don’t keep us waiting too long for hotel 8.


Reviewed by apollo sol on 10/31/2001

 

These stories have me wound up tight! I can’t wait to read about Debbies new boobs. I suggest having a “mistake” and getting double D’s.


Reviewed by jeannieon 10/31/2001

 

Miss Ford,

You are a wonderful writer and story teller. What little sissy would not want to be a maid in this world? I find myself both pitying and envying debbie.

Kisses, Jeannie

 

 

The Hotel Part 8

 

 

Online Story Reviews for:
The Hotel – Part 8
by: Deborah Ford

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Reviewed by submissive slut angelaon 01/11/2010

 

Miss Deborah, <curtsey>

Being an airheaded bimbo I have only just read your story. Miss Debbie you have written what I have always been looking for “The Story of O” for sissy maids. My Mistress is going to send me there. I’m to go with her submissive girl friend Melinda, who wants a man like Paulo with a big cock to fuck her, Master her and show her the error of her ways by putting her over his knee and spanking her. I am to stay until Miss Evans thinks I have met the stringent behaviour my Mistress demands. Miss Evans will send her a weekly report on Tuesday. On Wednesday my Mistress will request my company on a date. What happens on the date depends on how good or bad my weeks report has been.

Love and kissy kisses angela

P.S. My girly name once I have requested to be taken to “The Point” by Miss Melinda’s hunky, big cocked manly boyfriend, is to be angela Nal.

Signed aNal xxx

 


Reviewed by Truckloadbillion 10/08/2009

 

love this story “Hotel” you need some more Chapters What happens in the Bondage sessions Love to Know

Regards


Reviewed by Janelleon 06/09/2008

 

Debbie,
I read the whole Hotel in two days, enthralled, sweat dripping.
But,as a romantic, I really wanted our poor idiot to be reunited with his wife.
It occurs to me though, that Linda did not want to go until she spoke with the Hotel management and at that time she became supportive which suggests strongly that she wanted to shed her CD husband and take up with a more ‘manly’ and perhaps more affluent man.


Reviewed by Mistress Meredith on 05/22/2008

 

(Dictated to my sissy maid, Priscilla Ann — who is on his/her knees with a steno pad and pencil)
Simply wonderful; each of the eight parts constitues a marvelous story of its own. Meanwhile, all eight parts are just perfect together; a well-thought out novella of forced feminization, delicious humiliations and well-deserved corporal punishments. Well done, INDEED!


Reviewed by Francineon 04/09/2008

 

Another classic tale. I’ve been hooked on Deborah since I first found your stories last year and have now read them all. Please write more. As one of the reviewers said, we’d love to know where and what Debbie is up to now. Did she go back with her wife and Paulo or did she go with Mistress Shania? Can’t wait for more.


Reviewed by Auntie Penelopeon 05/07/2004

 

The Hotel

A husband and wife came to stay,
And the husband was soon whisked away,
He became a good maid,
And he saw her get laid,
But where is the poor girl today?

Please write more Deborah. Many of us would love to know what happened to our heroine.

xxxx


Reviewed by Marciaon 12/29/2003

 

Merry Xmas Deborah

I can’t believe its nearly 2 years since Part 8 was poated it doesnt seem that long ago, maybe its because i’m still reading parts of the Hotel on a regular basis.

I was thinking if Only fools and horses can have Xmas specials how about a xmas Hotel Special??

Please keep writing I love your work.

Marcia

 


Reviewed by emma on 07/27/2003

 

I enjoyed the whole ‘hotel’ series very much, well all your work in fact, as another reviewer aptly put it. ‘presses the right buttons.
While I realise you cant please ‘all the people all of the time’. I would like to offer a little in the way of critique, for me the dominating of the sissy’s wife by her lover (the hotel and ‘if you must’)while not totally spoiling the story, takes the ‘edge’ off for me the woman must always be superior!(or at least equal to their real man lovers) never the less, the cuckoldry of the sissy which is flaunted before ‘her’is wonderful!
an even more minor note, the uniforms in the hotel while sounding quite lovely, instead of the ‘tight black panties’, frilly sissy maids ones would heve been deliciously more appropriate.
I adore the touches throughout, like the slow realisation thet the ‘hotel’ is for keeps and the ‘game’ turns into ‘awful’ reality.
The scene in ‘happiness for all’ where the lover and wife eject the sissy from the maritial bed is devine!
it reminds me of my own first time as a cuckold and being sent to the spare room.

I’m glad that the reviews inspire you to write more, In turn your writing has inspired me to write. Maybe some of my work will appear soon.
take care
Love
Emma

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Reviewed by joanie4tyingon 05/25/2003

 

Dear Deborah,
i have been waiting so long to hear some more of your stories – either new or continuations. Please do not stop writing.
joanie4tying


Reviewed by Gerda-Berlinon 04/01/2003

 

Werte Frau? Deborah Ford!
ich liebe die Geschichten. Besonders, wenn es nicht so viele Sexorgien gibt. Ich kann kein Englisch. Mit meinem Computer lasse ich die Geschichten übersetzen. So entstand auch dieser Brief. Ich hoffe der Brief ist verständlich. Ich bin ein transexueller Mann. Wie in der Geschichte “Das Hotel” liebe ich es auch meiner Ehefrau als Mädchen zu dienen. Ich habe bereits die Absicht gehabt ein solch Wochenende zu buchen. In England gibt es von der Firma Transformation solch ein Hotel. Ihre Geschichte hat mich sehr gefesselt. Nun bin ich ängstlich. Kann die Geschichte auch in Wirklichkeit passieren? Kann meine Frau auch so gemein sein? Werde ich dann gefangen? Ich habe diese Geschichte mit gemischten Gefühlen gelesen. In meinem Körper streiten sich nicht nur Mann und Frau. Auch Freiheit uns Sklaventum. Egal wie es auch sei. Ich freue mich schon auf weitere Geschichten.
Vielen Dank für die Geschichte
von Gerda-Berlin aus Deutschland

Does woman judge? Deborah Ford!
I love the stories. Particularly if there aren’t so many sex orgies. I can not speak any English. I let the stories translate by my computer. This letter also arose so. I hope the letter is understandable. I am a transsexual man. Like in the history “the hotel” I also love to serve my wife as a girl. I have already had the intention one such to book weekend. There is such a hotel of the company transformation in England. Your history has fascinated me very much. I am anxious now. Can the history also happen in reality? Can my wife also be so common? Am I then caught? I have read this story with mixed feelings. Only man and woman don’t argue in my body. Also liberty us Slaves. Identical is like it also. I already look forward to further stories.
Many thanks for the history
Gerda-Berlin from Germany


Reviewed by SassySueon 01/21/2003

 

Ms Ford:

I finally got around to reading your magnum opus (truly meeting the definition: a “great work”) and couldn’t stop until I read all the chapters.

Very well written, vivid descriptions and highly entertaining.

I do have two small quibbles, however. The scenes after “the point” when Mistress Shania and Miss Jaguar, in your words, “fucked” Debbie left out the details. As someone who identified with Debbie, I know I would have liked those scenes to be a lot more descriptive like other parts of your novella.

Also it was hard to believe that the training and conditioning for only a few days were sufficient to prevent James from asking his wife to take him home when he had the chance. Maybe I just like to think I would be stronger willed.

None of this distracts from a great story that was extremely well written and that I thoroughly enjoyed.

I wouldn’t mind reading more adventures of Maid Debbie.

Keep up the good work.

SS

 


Reviewed by Marcia on 07/03/2002

 

This can’t be the end!! This was such a well written series that there are countless possibilities for how the story can continue.
Who will buy Debbie? Mistress shania or Mr Deacon? will she complete a year of service in the hotel? will there be anything left of her maleness after a year? will Miss johnson rescue debbie or just get paulo to buy her for there home as a Maid and Sex slave for paulo??

PLEASE continue the story with Part 2 this story cannot end with so many possibilities.

Luv and hugs

Marcia


Reviewed by “gina” on 05/18/2002

 

MISS FORD, HI!
i think it’s a pity you finished the “HOTEL” so! soon.
i’m sure there will be …many many more chapters!
Please don’t make all of …us to wait too long!
Thank you anyway

“gina”


Reviewed by JoannaCDon 01/23/2002

 

Thank you for writing this wonderful story Deborah. I suspect it’s not an accident that you have the same name as the protagonist of your story and that your fantasies and perhaps even some of your experiences are woven into this tale. I read it from beginning to end over the last two nights with rapt attention and excitement. I only paused long enough to order a pair of heels that I had been considering for the past two weeks. Your descriptions of Debbie on her heels put me over the edge. Thanks for that too. Like most great fiction this stands out because it could happen with a little stretch of the imagination; no magic spells or impossible occurrences. The CIA addition in this chapter was priceless. Again, a superb job. This should really be published on book form so that it joins the other classics of TG fiction. Now that I found you, I’m looking forward to reading your other work.


Reviewed by “Princess Pervette” on 01/19/2002

 

Postscript: They’d better watch out for that government guy. If he doesn’t show up within a reasonable time, the Feds will be in there with guns blazing! (Good thing Janet Reno is out; she’d burn it to the ground…!) –Pervy


Reviewed by MsShania on 01/18/2002

 

again a wonderful entry Debs………lets have more stories from you….SOON!


Reviewed by Candy Sissiboion 01/18/2002

 

(curtsey) Hello Ms. Ford,

I said Linzi when I meant Debbie! Oooh, a bimbo moment for me 🙂 Oh well, I loved both of your stories and couldn’t help myself from confusing both of these sissy airheads because I am a sissy airhead too! *smile* Please don’t punish me too severely 🙂

Luvs-n-Spanks,

Candy


Reviewed by latexsluton 01/18/2002

 

Dear Ms. Ford,

From the get go, i have always looked forward to, and enjoyed, your most excellent stories. Every chapter was consistant with the next: The characters and scenario, well developed. So thank You, Ms Ford, for these writings.

i look forward, perhaps much later, to part 2 of this tale.

i must say that i wish i could write as well as you. It’s simply excellent how You make the narrative push the plot.

thank You. And like everyone else says, more, please

latexslut


Reviewed by nikki on 01/17/2002

 

Thanks for the whole thing – it’s been wonderful
and has obsessed me for months
love
nikki
xxxx


Reviewed by Candy Sissiboion 01/17/2002

 

(curtsey) Hello Ms. Ford,

Oooh, thank you for finishing this classic story so nicely! Now that you have the “girls” all nicely trained and bimbo-ized completely we can see a very nice path of progression from where all this first started…most delicious a read this series has been and I have read each and every chapter as you published them. You made me feel the Linzi inside me and brought such delightful images into my mind…for that I curtsey and thank you ever so much!

Please do see me profile at:

http://profiles.yahoo.com/candytv

Now you can see a lil blonde tease in the making! There are more pix in my profile too of me in a variety of outfits. Perhaps they will inspire you ton continue with your writings and create another story sometime for all of us lil sissies to enjoy!

Luvs-n-Spanks,

Candy


Reviewed by belindaon 01/17/2002

 

This the the definitive sissy story. It has everything, including pace, sensitivity, and is so clever, thank you for all the real pleasure that your work has given me and many many others, love belinda, and thanks again xxx xxx


Reviewed by “Princess Pervette”on 01/17/2002

 

This is, and remains, one of the great, classic nightmares on Fictionmania. Expertly done, never flagging in inventiveness or logical development from beginning to end. I’m awe-struck And scared. –Pervy


Reviewed by ashley on 01/17/2002

 

This is perhaps one of the finest stories I’ve read here. Ms Ford certainly has a talent, and spins a tale with an air of class. In aid of kindness, we’re left with the hope that a franchise will open in our town.

Thank you, Deborah, for a most thrilling ride.

Hugz,
ash


Reviewed by kungfusissy on 01/17/2002

 

i love these stories! i wish that were my life, duped by my wife into becoming a brainless feminized sex toy! dare to dream. now i hope the author will write a dozen or so follow ups to the “if you must” story, cuz it rocked too! and if you know of a real hotel like this one, please let me know.
kungfu
xox


Reviewed by Drew on 01/17/2002

 

Easily one of, if not the, best stories on this site

 

 

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